1. Post #1
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    October 2012
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    I was short on my warhammer quota
    So have some daemon hunters fighting chaos (Ps. I suck at lasers)



    Criticism is appreciated
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    The contrast is way too high and blows out any fine details, which are rather important with such intricate (if low res) models.

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    wotman's Avatar
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    The contrast is way too high and blows out any fine details, which are rather important with such intricate (if low res) models.
    How so?

    EDITED:
    I lowered the contrast because I saw a bit of what you were getting at

  4. Post #4
    Better, although it's still a bit clogged. It's probably the lighting itself.

  5. Post #5
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    Better, although it's still a bit clogged. It's probably the lighting itself.
    I don't really think there is a way to make those low res models look better for me
    Because that heretic model is pretty ugly in the first place

  6. Post #6
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    It's not the models. The lighting -is- bad. It also seems kinda bland with only like, 5 guys on the right. Even if you dupe a bunch of them, and then use SDOF on the front two guys would be x10 better.

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    It's not the models. The lighting -is- bad. It also seems kinda bland with only like, 5 guys on the right. Even if you dupe a bunch of them, and then use SDOF on the front two guys would be x10 better.
    Well I tried my best to make it look good

  8. Post #8
    Prototype556's Avatar
    May 2011
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    Here's my own little tweak on it. I tried to help with your lighting situation (I know that map is hard to get the lighting right, I've tried before). May or may not like it, just kind of tried to even it out.

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    The posing is a little lackluster. No real weight behind it, particularly visible on the inquisitor's sword arm.

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    very casual stabbing and reaction
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    some of the most stiff and robotic posing i've seen lately

  12. Post #12
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    Dennab
    December 2012
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    Effects of glowing and laser is too shitty, i dunno even how it possible to make something so bad in ps.
    Posing seems too wry. Inquisitor broke his hand, cultist kinda makes a bow, all ragdolls scattered around in chaos.
    I don't wanna even talk about warhammer desecration on this picture. World Eaters with Black Legion? Inquisitor side by side with guardsmen? Stop playing DOW and read at least rulebook of Dark Heresy. This is contains the most full information about Imperium that i know.
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    Effects of glowing and laser is too shitty, i dunno even how it possible to make something so bad in ps.
    Posing seems too wry. Inquisitor broke his hand, cultist kinda makes a bow, all ragdolls scattered around in chaos.
    I don't wanna even talk about warhammer desecration on this picture. World Eaters with Black Legion? Inquisitor side by side with guardsmen? Stop playing DOW and read at least rulebook of Dark Heresy. This is contains the most full information about Imperium that i know.
    Oh well, you can't really expect perfection from me since I'm still practicing with effects like the laser

    And from what I have read, inquisitors can bolster their strike forces with forces from the adeptus astarates, imperial guard, and officio assassitorum. Plus the storm troopers are inquisitorial storm troopers, even though they don't look like it due to the ones I the picture being their only model, so I at least tried. As for the chaos I guess that was a stupid idea to put the red guy in there. Oh well, trial and error. I'll try to improve on things that were pointed out, because I appreciate your criticism. Plus I'm still more or less a beginner with warhammer, so thanks for the suggestion.

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    nowadays the World Eaters are a scattered bunch of roaming warbands offering their services to anyone who can provide bloody slaughter and skull taking, and Abaddon's legion and Black Crusades are an excellent opportunity for both. you're the one suffering from lore lag here Torchwood

    Edited:

    and some trivia: the red marine in the pic isn't even a berzerker in the first place
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    Stop playing DOW and read at least rulebook of Dark Heresy. This is contains the most full information about Imperium that i know.
    Read the codices. They're straight from GW themselves. If you did, you would know Inquisitorial Stormtroopers exist.

    Also,

    nowadays the World Eaters are a scattered bunch of roaming warbands offering their services to anyone who can provide bloody slaughter and skull taking, and Abaddon's legion and Black Crusades are an excellent opportunity for both. you're the one suffering from lore lag here Torchwood

    EDIT: Where did you get the inquisitor and stormtrooper models? :o

  16. Post #16
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    Dennab
    December 2012
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    nowadays the World Eaters are a scattered bunch of roaming warbands offering their services to anyone who can provide bloody slaughter and skull taking, and Abaddon's legion and Black Crusades are an excellent opportunity for both. you're the one suffering from lore lag here Torchwood

    Edited:

    and some trivia: the red marine in the pic isn't even a berzerker in the first place
    I'm not really big specialist in Chaos, more about Imperium. I'm not remember what Legions were decomposed to the shit after Heresy, and what were not.
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    I'm not really big specialist in Chaos, more about Imperium. I'm not remember what Legions were decomposed to the shit after Heresy, and what were not.
    Well I honestly don't know if we can even take you seriously as a "specialist" about the Imperium, since you lack the knowledge that inquisitorial stormtroopers exist

  18. Post #18
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    nowadays the World Eaters are a scattered bunch of roaming warbands offering their services to anyone who can provide bloody slaughter and skull taking, and Abaddon's legion and Black Crusades are an excellent opportunity for both. you're the one suffering from lore lag here Torchwood

    Edited:

    and some trivia: the red marine in the pic isn't even a berzerker in the first place
    There was a marine labeled berserker in the SM pack so I went with what it said, even though it doesn't look exactly like one

  19. Post #19
    I am a serious faggot who no one likes. guys i'm super serial, tell garry to unban me already :(
    Dennab
    December 2012
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    Well I honestly don't know if we can even take you seriously as a "specialist" about the Imperium, since you lack the knowledge that inquisitorial stormtroopers exist
    What a funny behaviour. Are you trying to start some another useless dispute, by catching any failure in my posts?
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    What a funny behaviour. Are you trying to start some another useless dispute, by catching any failure in my posts?
    No I'm saying you should spend more time making better screenshots instead of handing out criticism with no base.

    I.E., do your research.
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  21. Post #21
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    Read the codices. They're straight from GW themselves. If you did, you would know Inquisitorial Stormtroopers exist.

    Also,




    EDIT: Where did you get the inquisitor and stormtrooper models? :o
    A big DOW2 port pack
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  22. Post #22
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    Instead of making excuses every time someone offers their criticism on it, you could take it and improve on it.

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    Alsojames's Avatar
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    A big DOW2 port pack
    Time to look everywhere


    EDIT: unless you can tell me where you got it

  24. Post #24
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    Time to look everywhere
    You're gonna need tourtise SVN if you find it, if you need help looking just ask, but I had trouble finding it in the first place. Though I'm sure I found it by searching warhammer dawn of war 2 gmod or something along those lines.

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    the DoW2 pack has horrible shaders by the way, open all the texture .VMT files with Notepad and delete every line that says "$rimlight"
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    the DoW2 pack has horrible shaders by the way, open all the texture .VMT files with Notepad and delete every line that says "$rimlight"
    Alright, i'll do that. It will make it look more decent?
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    I can't add much to the conversation other than what's been said.

    I'd just like to note that if they are necrobard's models, then the posing can really be forgiven due to their phys being p. mediocre.

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    Alright, i'll do that. It will make it look more decent?
    It'll make it look less like ass. I'd also recommend you delete anything to do with phong, since the specular maps were incredibly lazy if I recall.

    Effects of glowing and laser is too shitty, i dunno even how it possible to make something so bad in ps.
    Posing seems too wry. Inquisitor broke his hand, cultist kinda makes a bow, all ragdolls scattered around in chaos.
    I don't wanna even talk about warhammer desecration on this picture. World Eaters with Black Legion? Inquisitor side by side with guardsmen? Stop playing DOW and read at least rulebook of Dark Heresy. This is contains the most full information about Imperium that i know.
    For the record, you're showing quite a low knowledge of fluff as well.

    a) inquisitors levy guard units or planetary PDF units all the time. And they have their own inquisitorial stormtrooper units
    b) chaos is in no way unified and it's possible you'd find world eaters among the blacklegion. Admittedly this is even more likely a berzerker, who may have once been a world eater, but now goes where the blood flows the most.
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  29. Post #29
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    I can't add much to the conversation other than what's been said.

    I'd just like to note that if they are necrobard's models, then the posing can really be forgiven due to their phys being p. mediocre.
    If he's the one who made the huge port pack, then yes.

    Edited:

    It'll make it look less like ass. I'd also recommend you delete anything to do with phong, since the specular maps were incredibly lazy if I recall.



    For the record, you're showing quite a low knowledge of fluff as well.

    a) inquisitors levy guard units or planetary PDF units all the time. And they have their own inquisitorial stormtrooper units
    b) chaos is in no way unified and it's possible you'd find world eaters among the blacklegion. Admittedly this is even more likely a berzerker, who may have once been a world eater, but now goes where the blood flows the most.
    Alright, I will try that out, thanks.

  30. Post #30
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    if you need help looking just ask, but I had trouble finding it in the first place. .
    Yeah it'd be great if you could point me in the right direction for getting those models :D

  31. Post #31
    I'm a newfoundlander born and bred and i'll be one till' I die
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    Yeah it'd be great if you could point me in the right direction for getting those models :D
    http://facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=922420 Pretty sure this is it

  32. Post #32
    Alsojames's Avatar
    September 2012
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    Sweet, thanks. I'll check it out when I get home.

    Grrr. Conflictign emotions. I want those models but I don't want to download SVN.

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    Effects of glowing and laser is too shitty, i dunno even how it possible to make something so bad in ps.
    Posing seems too wry. Inquisitor broke his hand, cultist kinda makes a bow, all ragdolls scattered around in chaos.
    I don't wanna even talk about warhammer desecration on this picture. World Eaters with Black Legion? Inquisitor side by side with guardsmen? Stop playing DOW and read at least rulebook of Dark Heresy. This is contains the most full information about Imperium that i know.
    how to make an ass of yourself in one easy post
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