[[LOA] SonofBrim]

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[Joazzz]

always love to see non-shitty use of those stock muzzleflashes


the nanosuit's armor effect is really distracting though

[The Gobo]

The direction of the gun in the right hand of the nano-suit seems off to me.
Then again, I'm probably looking at it wrong.

[AFewOstriches]

The posing in general's a bit awkward. Everyone seems pretty stiff.

[[LOA] SonofBrim]

AFewOstriches posted:

The posing in general's a bit awkward. Everyone seems pretty stiff.

This is the most ragdoll-centric pose I've ever done, it's definitely not my strong point. Any advice?

Edited:

Also, this is a scenebuild on gm_black using the z-pass method.

Here's the original and z-pass, if anybody wants to take a crack at the editing for practice.

[BradEBurns]

I definitely loved the idea.

[LunaBadger]

The nano-suit fellow is overextended.
His guns are aiming a direction that makes no sense compared to where he is heading.
Should have brought his left arm closer to his front a bit along with the gun, and in the right arm should have tucked the stock under his arm instead of having it above his arm.

The metroid fellow, from how i perceive it, looks like they're missing the shot.
imo should have brought arm closer to us so that it looks like a more direct chest shot.

editing is nice, though. looks good.