1. Post #1
    King7's Avatar
    January 2013
    529 Posts
    Focused on the Soldier

    Focused on Soldiers coming downstairs


    I tried my best with the crappy light ray effects (or sprites or whatever).

    Constructive Criticism as usual please.

    Have a happy holiday!
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  2. Post #2
    UTSTriggerhappy's Avatar
    August 2010
    330 Posts
    Good work here man, solid submission. Only real issues would be the posing on the soldier (main guy). He should have more of a ready stance and the handgun/arm is a bit off. The stance looks a bit stiff is all. The bodies on the ground look a bit generic too. When I pose dead soldiers, have them sprawled out on the ground, makes it more believable in my opinion. Builds a story. A few props to add to the scene would definitely add to your picture too. But I quite like it bud, make some more!
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  3. Post #3
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    Viper123_SWE's Avatar
    May 2011
    7,657 Posts
    The first one is better and as Trigger said the bodies on the floor look a bit unrealistic in the sense that they're all pretty much lying on the floor in identical positions.

  4. Post #4
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    Joazzz's Avatar
    June 2008
    26,040 Posts
    what exactly are those lens flares coming from

  5. Post #5
    King7's Avatar
    January 2013
    529 Posts
    what exactly are those lens flares coming from
    Christmas Spirit?
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