1. Post #1
    doombman's Avatar
    June 2013
    110 Posts
    I AM SIEGMEYER OF SOUTH AFRICA
    AND I---- zzzzz....



    C&C would be appreciated
    LOL TITLE WAS SPELLED WRONG



    What I was initially trying to do was simulate a dwarven fortress underground.
    Such as, let's say the ENTIRE thing is underground. But there's an opening. So basically the light, comes from the mine opening that leads to the surface.
    thus, from the first picture, I was trying to hint at it.
    Didn't work well.
    Though, I added African American Iron Markus into the picture for extra cosmetics.
    Added a second camera angle to feel good about myself.
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  2. Post #2
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    Daemon White's Avatar
    July 2010
    8,117 Posts
    Looks nice, but the rest of the scene seems rather dark for an open sky (Looking at the background) setting. The architecture and scene are nice, but the lighting is a bit dark, and I'm wondering why Siegmeyer is green.
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  3. Post #3
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    January 2012
    1,471 Posts
    The lighting on some of the plants seem pretty off. And to be honest, I think you could have done a little better with posing him.
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  4. Post #4
    doombman's Avatar
    June 2013
    110 Posts
    @Daemon White
    attempted to make a greenish like reflection from light shining off of the water.
    @kaden
    no way I can fix that, shading on foilage is tricky because the light will light the entire entity up, instead of simply lighting the section that should be covered.
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    July 2010
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    Oh, you re-did it a bit. 3rd one added is nice, actually. No visibly open sky this time, and the green was toned down a lot, without losing the green tint.
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  6. Post #6
    doombman's Avatar
    June 2013
    110 Posts
    THEN THAT'S HOW I'M DOING MY STUFF NOW
    three different angles with different lighting, and through stages of toning.
    Such as removing lense flare.

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    T_T crai2's Avatar
    August 2005
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    the moust incredible jouney

  8. Post #8
    Dennab
    January 2012
    2,804 Posts
    i love you onion man