[Srgt. Shotup]

Here's a picture of the scenebuild itself on gm_scenebuild_dusk: http://i.cubeupload.com/5qzP1D.jpg

[xiGRAHAMix]

There's so much detail lacking in my opinion, the sky is blank and there are only 7 trees in the background. Foreground is a bit boring, there should be some more foliage. I've heard your name so many times I expect a bit more (I believe you do more porting and rigging and all that fun stuff). Anyway, a decent use of Elder Scrolls props here, and the lighting is actually pretty good. Hope this criticism helps.

[VaciliNikoMav]

Very interesting creature ^^

[Srgt. Shotup]

xiGRAHAMix posted:

There's so much detail lacking in my opinion, the sky is blank and there are only 7 trees in the background. Foreground is a bit boring, there should be some more foliage. I've heard your name so many times I expect a bit more (I believe you do more porting and rigging and all that fun stuff). Anyway, a decent use of Elder Scrolls props here, and the lighting is actually pretty good. Hope this criticism helps.

I appreciate the crit. I suppose I got stuck trying to make a barren hilltop look, but still having some objects to break up the scene. I've tried a little different angle/added mountains to the background.



Better, worse?

[xiGRAHAMix]

Better, worse?

Definitely better, yet only in a slight amount. The mountains in the background are a sure improvement, and the toned down lighting seems to make it much less dramatic and intense (I honestly like that more). So, better.