[Exorade]

When the soldiers of the Ruthenian conglomerate emerged from the old forest, they were met with an an unverving sight.
A line of spears, almost as if infinite in quantity and disappearing in the horizon, decorated with skeletons, their hands and feet cut off, it surrounded the forest line.
Beyond this line were the lands of the dead. After they would cross it, they would leave the lands of the living behind.

[Booker K]

Outstanding work.

[VaciliNikoMav]

"Удачи штурма замок!"
(I used Google for this since I assume they are all Russians.)
Excellent work ^^

[RoblixWW2]

Really good work, Exorade. Maybe the best you made. Don't you have screen of scene build? If yes, can you post it?

[T_T crai2]

Yarr, this be fantastic.

[Joazzz]

somehow your stuff reminds me of Fallout, but with less retro-sci-fi and more nomads


the atmosphere is nice and apocalyptic

[Rick VIce]

I really love the story this could tell out, hope to see a lot more of these soon.

[Exorade]

Thanks for all the comments.

Joazzz posted:

somehow your stuff reminds me of Fallout, but with less retro-sci-fi and more nomads

The holnists in *aame-rii-ii-ii-caah* the Postman always inspired me more when it comes to armed forces in post apocalyptia than Fallout.
Hence, nomads.

RoblixWW2 posted:

Don't you have screen of scene build? If yes, can you post it?

[UTSTriggerhappy]

Another great scenebuild, lots of atmosphere! It's getting harder and harder to criticise you as you progress and grow, but I do have some gripes! But its always meant constructively

First, I think the atmosphere would really benefit from light/subtle snow, and some wind. It's just lacking some of the special effects Garrysmod doesn't exactly provide, but if you added some smoke, snow, wind gusts, it would really perfect your image. And if you added breath out of the soldiers mouths, that would be a nice touch too. Another thing I'd have to mention is the legs of some of the soldiers look a tad awkward. But thats just me being really picky!

Hope to see more and more of your work, great job once again!

[Exorade]

UTSTriggerhappy posted:

And if you added breath out of the soldiers mouths

I have no idea how to do that, therefore I didn't.

[The_Sav]

Pretty damn spiffy scenebuild! I wouldn't even know where to start in making something like that myself. Great work.