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  1. 17th November 2013 Last edited by Netsforex_1; 17th November 2013 at 03:26PM. Post #1
    Netsforex_1
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    Latest strip, just finished it.
    You guys are getting it first (Before I even upload it on the website).
    I'm aware the blur looks odd in places (more like his arms are just blurred out instead of in-motion) but it was my first time attempting something like this having never really used photoshop that much.
    Also, that baseball cap was a f***ing nightmare.

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    Looking back the humour seems rather infantile to me, but let me know what you guys think!
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  2. 17th November 2013 Post #2
    TheGoodDoctorF
    A six sided fish cube of the Flounder variety
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    whatatwist
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  3. 17th November 2013 Post #3
    gk99
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    The plot thickens.
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  4. 17th November 2013 Post #4
    Bubz
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    half-assed
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  5. 17th November 2013 Post #5
    Netsforex_1
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    Bubz posted:
    half-assed
    That's not constructive criticism.
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  6. 17th November 2013 Post #6
    Joazzz
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    don't bother with Bubz
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  7. 17th November 2013 Post #7
    Mythos
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    I see an improvement in editing, which makes me a happy panda. Kind of wish the doctor had mentioned "hemorrhoids" instead of "herpes" because then the "you may want to sit down" would've been so ironic.

    Is jpeg_quality set to 100 though? It looks a bit compressed to me, but could be my imagination. That's not a big flaw though, just a minor thing to improve even further.

    Overall, good job, I see you're quickly getting better - and I really appreciate you taking criticism and actually applying it, because that is not as common as you might think - and I'm really amazed at the speed you do these. Looking forward to the next one!
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  8. 18th November 2013 Post #8
    VaciliNikoMav
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    Very clever work ^^
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  9. 18th November 2013 Post #9
    Alexandroras
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    The blur on the arms was kinda useless in my opinion.

    Otherwise, its ok
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