[CPShArp]

Part 1: http://www.facepunch.com/threads/716...ro-Hour-Part-1(thread has links to other parts)




Developer commentary:
-This part was made using gmod 9, 10, and 13

[mcharest]

Great work mate! Good to see you're still continuing the series. Like the previous parts, the mix of action and humor makes for a great read.

[FlatPancake]

Had to glance back at Part 3 for a reminder as to what happened last, but it's nice to see a continuation to this. I thought the paneling was good, with most of the isolation work also being well done. The blood editing had the issue of seeming too 2D, at least to me, but that's my only small complaint.

[Dactrius]

I agree the blood is really the only standout issue with this, but otherwise it's so damn sexy. You've got a gift for pacing, everything segues into the next part so smoothly. Also your dialogue is very well done.

The fight with the assassin there makes me so jealous, you posed and paced it so well. This is really a great comic. Well done!

[DarkLucario]

Very excellent so far, keep up the great work! :)

[Mythos]

Pretty damn good read, although not without a few faults. For one thing, you need someone to spellcheck it - there are no big errors or anything, but the lack of punctuation at points and some other typos, however minor, detract slightly from the comic's presentation. The sound effects at the beginning of the comic could also be improved; I did notice that they got a lot better when you went for action, but the earlier effects were so small and simple that they're easy to miss. I, for one, didn't notice the "*CLICK*" early on and thought the guy was still on the phone, which, obviously, made no sense. It needed a slight stroke or something to be more easily noticed, or a more colorful appearance. As for the blood, it's not bad, it's just too bright - you need a darker hue of red.

That said, it's an excellent comic with one of the best layouts I've seen in ages - and believe me, I've grown arrogantly picky in that department, so it really is good. I hope you'll keep it up!

[Rick VIce]

Man I've missed reading these. Dandy glad to see you're still working on them.

[Arctic Aveng]

It's really great to be able to read another issue of this little comic I liked.

[MLuomuksia]

Nice job on the comic. I hope I get to see more in the future.

[CPShArp]

Mythos posted:

Pretty damn good read, although not without a few faults. For one thing, you need someone to spellcheck it - there are no big errors or anything, but the lack of punctuation at points and some other typos, however minor, detract slightly from the comic's presentation. The sound effects at the beginning of the comic could also be improved; I did notice that they got a lot better when you went for action, but the earlier effects were so small and simple that they're easy to miss. I, for one, didn't notice the "*CLICK*" early on and thought the guy was still on the phone, which, obviously, made no sense. It needed a slight stroke or something to be more easily noticed, or a more colorful appearance. As for the blood, it's not bad, it's just too bright - you need a darker hue of red.

That said, it's an excellent comic with one of the best layouts I've seen in ages - and believe me, I've grown arrogantly picky in that department, so it really is good. I hope you'll keep it up!

Yeah I'm pretty bad with action words and the like. I literally spent a good 15 minutes trying to say action words that sounded good for gun shots and bullets hitting walls.

The panel with the close up of the pistol and shotgun was supposed to originally have some action words in there as you can tell from the white space...I ultimately decided not to and left it blank. :/

[Nightmare515]

Awesome,truely amazing work!

Edited:

This inspired me. :)

[CPShArp]

Nightmare515 posted:

Awesome,truely amazing work!

Edited:

This inspired me. :)

Thanks!

I try. ;)