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Starring Samantha from Tomb Raider and my new Rochelle re-skin.
(Custom hair edit)
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It amazes me that even after photoshop and " enhanced " skins Rochelle still looks frumpy
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This is not Photoshop. Just in game light and edit in Gimp. And what does "frumpy" mean?
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The hair looks super flat and has a massive hard edge near the top. The couple random strands that go over the asian also make no sense at all.
Last but not least - hard edged super polygonal flower.
Honestly if you make such super focused scenes as this, make sure that the parts actually look up to spec.
It's excuseable in a larger scene, but not like this imho.
Probably the corners of her mouth being corny from the normal map, a case of double lip syndrome (again probably due to normal map) as well as the sheer amount of bumpyness in the corners of her eyes.
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Oh crap. Posted the wrong version. Corrected.
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I actually thing Rochelle looks better here, huh.
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The only change is gaussian blur around the lip corners? I mean it looks a teenie weniee bit better but not by much to be honest.
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You see! The idea is to judge the actual picture, not mess it up on purpose (increasing contrast) and then call it bad. Well done minilandstan.
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they're in the original image too
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wow that failed ninjaedit
the common term for manipulating pictures is 'photoshopping' stop nitpicking
i don't like the desaturated bloom but that's a stylistic choice so i'll let it slide. you could have smoothed out the edges of the flowers tho, that's the first thing that really caught my eye
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Please explain?
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This isn't really threadworthy tbh
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Seriously?
That "highlights" joke points out an error in YOUR image, he didn't add it.
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It's clearly visible in the original image, he boosted the contrast so you could clearly see the mistake.
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Spent a good amount of time on the hair and skin tone (smoothing) I forgot about the flowers when I was satisfied. My bad.
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Not very good.
Boring, uninteresting angle and premise. Shoddy hair editing with very little to no depth. Hair that is brighter than the rest of the hair for no apparent reason. Visible jagged edges. Flowers with a polycount and texture quality roughly in the realms of the hand of a character in Unreal Tournament '99. Grey highlights.
On the flip side, the faceposing isn't bad. But unfortunately it's about the only good thing.
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He's talking about the mega hard edge on the hair that's being highlightened.
Honestly I really do recommend you start working on larger scenes and then go into detail, because frankly you're missing a lot of very obvious errors for some reason. And to top it off all your images look the same.
Rastifan styled image - Semi nude chicks, desaturated bloom, slightly brightened, slightly desaturated, glow on everything.
Do something different, add more colours, lights that play with stuff, day time poses. Hell even include semi nude chicks but give them nice bright stuff. And make the poses larger so that you can learn where the errors start showing up in a larger picture.
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Listen. There is no bloom here. No glow. This is post edit. Please don't guess what I did. Ask me. For the rest of your criticism, sure I will try to improve.
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Really? Because I see a ton of bloom and glow.
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how come everything you do is lesbians
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Fair question! But I happen to find lesbians very sexy. Do you know anyone spending their time posing stuff they don't like?
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Well you could be a bit more creative, just saying as all.
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I mean they could even still be nude.
Also I do a crap ton of generic posing, but I mainly keep that stuff in the want to post your picture thread, I advise others to do so too.
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... everyone else?
does jenkins only pose shell-shocked army men?
does ddok only pose soldiers?
does radley only pose russians?
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You mean poses that FP approves of? How is that creative? Look at the threads. Most are the same stuff. Some good, some bad, but the same.
I really don't see how this will make me more creative. I might be one sided in what I make. Shit I will be the first to admit that. But let's face it!
This section of FP is not exactly the spear front of new ideas either.
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So you're going to ignore criticism on the grounds that not everyone follows it?
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It's not important if it's in game or post process. The point remains the same.
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Should probably have posted this in stead. Jill the hit woman. Is more FP like.
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...an-d4zwqmz.jpg
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It's better than bad lighting bad editing lesbians and bad story telling lesbian comics ontop of lesbian poses where bad lighting and lesbians thrive
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Alright. I have a fairly new 24 inch wide screen. What the fuck are people seeing that I don't?
This is annoying. Tried viewing the poses from different angles of the monitor. See no contrast breach on the hair.
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Edited:
unedited except for the arrows~~~
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And bad English.
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So we're back to this argument?
I've seen a massive range of different styles, themes and stories posted on this board. I have seen broad ranges of unique screens and comics from single unique people.
All I see from you is half nude lesbians. Stop hiding under the guise of 'being unique and original' because you're actually the complete opposite.
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I used to pose about murder, drug abuse, abundance of money, survival.
I enjoy and participate in none of those things.
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Rastifan makes a pose of a girl kissing a girl, cue raging arguments. I love this place.
I do resent that you call everything else "the same", Rastifan. If anything, I try to differentiate by telling a proper story in various chapters. And let's face it, it's not like most of your poses aren't essentially the same thing over and over and over again.
Point being, if you don't want to cause arguments, don't point fingers. You won't be helping your cause.
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i don't think anyone here exactly likes war, death and suffering, but guess what most poses are about...
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Uhh of course no one likes war and murder unless you are a freaking psychopath. I was talking about what people like to pose. Not the same thing yes.
Excluding the sick fucks who makes rape poses. Not so sure about them.
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Kill the motor. I was talking about regular poses. I already told you I like your comics.
And I don't have a cause. Not sure what you mean by that. It's just a forum where people post their stuff. Don't take it so seriously.
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I knew I shouldn't have come to this thread
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very well then
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