1. Post #1
    Waxx's Avatar
    January 2005
    240 Posts
    Edit: Marc Laidlaw approved:



    Edit: Chris Livingston, creator of Concerned, approved:


    It's been a long time since Okimin and I posted the first two episodes of this. After nearly two months of work here and there, we are pleased to say that the long-awaited third episode is now complete and ready for viewing. We hope you like it as much as we do. If you haven't read the first two episodes, it is strongly recommended that you do so! They can be found here:



    And now, without further ado:












    Thank you for reading. Hope you enjoyed it. Stay tuned for the next episode.
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  2. Post #2
    okimin21's Avatar
    June 2012
    33 Posts
    I hope you guys enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it! We got more coming and with my break I should hopefully be able to get them out more frequently.
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  3. Post #3
    A six sided fish cube of the Flounder variety
    TheGoodDoctorF's Avatar
    March 2010
    3,381 Posts
    Hands down the best comic I've read in ages. Loved every panel of it.
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  4. Post #4
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    June 2005
    3,054 Posts
    Goddamn finally. It's a good thing you guys are still doing these, because they're quite enjoyable.
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  5. Post #5
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    January 2012
    3,151 Posts
    yeysyesyes
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  6. Post #6
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    July 2009
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    Seamus is starting to become my favorite character.
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  7. Post #7
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    September 2008
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    The swooping in briefcase and the chariot were fantastic.
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  8. Post #8
    okimin21's Avatar
    June 2012
    33 Posts
    Seamus is starting to become my favorite character.
    thank you so much
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  9. Post #9
    The King of Wing
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    May 2008
    4,914 Posts
    "Let's Roll."
    Dear God man,
    your comedy is genius.

    On a more serious note, I did really like the editing,
    especially when the combat started.
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  10. Post #10
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    October 2006
    520 Posts
    I can not wait to read this!
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  11. Post #11
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    March 2007
    3,331 Posts
    whats a comic?

    Is it like a long form screenshot?
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  12. Post #12
    Waxx's Avatar
    January 2005
    240 Posts
    it's kind of like a really stupid thing that people waste time on

    i think????
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  13. Post #13

    January 2005
    31 Posts
    Oh my god who are these FALOTI guys, they are crazy!
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  14. Post #14
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    October 2006
    520 Posts
    This was really good. Keep up the good work.
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  15. Post #15
    Dennab
    January 2005
    236 Posts
    Waxx, I've known you for nearly a decade now - since even the very first gmod comics were ever posted on this forum... and I can honestly say this is probably the best one yet. You and Okimin make a good team. There are well executed gags all over this thing - it doesn't even matter if it's based in HL2 lore, it would still be solid on its own.

    My only criticism is that in the first episode you actually made me look at ⅔ of a Cathy comic and I don't think I'll ever be able to forgive you for that.
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  16. Post #16
    Waxx's Avatar
    January 2005
    240 Posts
    That was Okimin's doing and you can blame him for it.

    But I deeply appreciate your kind words, friend.
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  17. Post #17
    Kiss me, I'm Irish
    Fort83's Avatar
    September 2006
    9,176 Posts
    So freaking good, I love this series. You are one of my inspirations to get more tnto the comic making world.
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  18. Post #18
    Waxx's Avatar
    January 2005
    240 Posts
    Thank you, I am glad you found inspiration in it.

    Protip: Out of the 100+ separate panels in this comic, there is one Easter egg. See if you can find it.
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  19. Post #19
    Dennab
    September 2011
    74 Posts
    Thank you, I am glad you found inspiration in it.

    Protip: Out of the 100+ separate panels in this comic, there is one Easter egg. See if you can find it.
    found it.
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  20. Post #20
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    July 2010
    5,585 Posts
    It's good to see so many comics being made as of late.
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  21. Post #21
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    January 2013
    61 Posts
    I've been hooked on this since I was introduced to it a few weeks back and I've been camping the site since for another episode. This comic is peerless as far as humour and delivery is concerned. The posing is top-notch and the character writing is superb. I'm so glad you're both still cranking these out, they're really fantastic. I only wish I could vote Winner more than once.
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  22. Post #22
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    June 2008
    26,038 Posts
    hell yes
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  23. Post #23
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    July 2010
    704 Posts
    Gotta love Sokolov.
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  24. Post #24
    Waxx's Avatar
    January 2005
    240 Posts
    you guys can even consider this to be our application post for espionage wars three
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  25. Post #25
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    November 2008
    2,602 Posts
    I missed these.
    Good thing you haven't given up on them.
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  26. Post #26
    Waxx's Avatar
    January 2005
    240 Posts


    bonus floating feet FALOTI guard photo
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  27. Post #27
    Mythos's Avatar
    July 2010
    1,060 Posts
    Ah, shite, I completely missed the release. I'll read it a bit later and give my opinion; I've already posted a link at Metrocop.net.

    EDIT: Okay, I've read it and... wow, that's pretty damn good. I loved the first two but this one really is better - funnier, smarter, more action-packed, it's got it all. You and Okimin might be the best team ever in GMod comics. Conglaturations, you win at comix.

    Also, that's like the fourth comic release in two weeks. It's a Renaissance, baby!
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  28. Post #28
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    December 2007
    13,496 Posts
    Nice comic. Some parts were hard to follow, but overall quite liked it.
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  29. Post #29
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    March 2006
    3,200 Posts
    Just awesome, love good 'ol comics.
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  30. Post #30
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    August 2011
    20,109 Posts
    "Let's break for lunch."

    fucking incredible
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  31. Post #31
    okimin21's Avatar
    June 2012
    33 Posts
    Nice comic. Some parts were hard to follow, but overall quite liked it.
    If you don't mind me asking, what exactly tripped you up? It's helpful for me to know where people might get lost.
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  32. Post #32
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    December 2007
    13,496 Posts
    Mostly minor stuff really. In part due to how similar some of Valve citizens are to each other. I think it would have been good to use as different as possible citizens in some scenes to the main characters.

    It kinda left me confused for a moment what happened. Why are they sitting there in blue now. And stuff like that.

    Though I understand that that is probably because a lot of the characters are perskins of sorts.
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  33. Post #33
    Tbonia will grow larger!
    McTbone's Avatar
    March 2010
    6,275 Posts
    you guys can even consider this to be our application post for espionage wars three
    shit man you're welcomed to esp wars anytime
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  34. Post #34
    Dennab
    September 2011
    74 Posts
    If you don't mind me asking, what exactly tripped you up? It's helpful for me to know where people might get lost.
    it was the part that involved basic reading and comprehension skills
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  35. Post #35
    okimin21's Avatar
    June 2012
    33 Posts
    Mostly minor stuff really. In part due to how similar some of Valve citizens are to each other. I think it would have been good to use as different as possible citizens in some scenes to the main characters.

    It kinda left me confused for a moment what happened. Why are they sitting there in blue now. And stuff like that.

    Though I understand that that is probably because a lot of the characters are perskins of sorts.
    Thanks I suppose we'll try to clear that up from now on. Thanks for being honest! We'll keep in touch.
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  36. Post #36
    Waxx's Avatar
    January 2005
    240 Posts
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  37. Post #37
    WtfIrish's Avatar
    April 2006
    81 Posts
    Good comic! Still hate those speech bubbles
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  38. Post #38
    okimin21's Avatar
    June 2012
    33 Posts
    you couldn't speech bubble your way out of a god damn box you son of a bitch
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  39. Post #39
    WtfIrish's Avatar
    April 2006
    81 Posts
    Worst speech bubbles in the business
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  40. Post #40
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    July 2005
    559 Posts
    This comic changed my life, i think im finally going to give up meth.

       psych!   
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