[Bawheed]

seeing as gmod decided to delete all my addons I tried something using only default models. turned out okay i'd say!

[AFewOstriches]

The cigarette isn't lighting the guy's face, the smoke is a bit too opaque, fingerposing is odd, and it doesn't look like you rendered sdof, and the blood on his cheek looks superfluous.


All that being said, there's something that I really like about this. Not really sure what, though.

[Zeraxify]

AFewOstriches posted:

The cigarette isn't lighting the guy's face,

cigarettes aren't really great sources of light

[LunaBadger]

Yea.
It's too bright, even. Unless he's chiefing down on that thing, it wouldn't be lit up like that.
I do agree with the other points about the dof, blood and smoke. Also I feel like the left arm is too idle.