[Ichimrau13]

Link does not like the traders
Hi, this is my second video in gmod!
Please leave here or in the video, your opinion (Only if you have already made ​​a video of gmod)
Thanks and bye ;3

No children

[Joazzz]

shoopdawoop in the thumbnail

[Ryu-Gi]

Really should have used the Brawl Link model. The old TP one is kinda shit looking now.

[Ichimrau13]

Joazzz posted:

shoopdawoop in the thumbnail

FIRE MY LASER

Ryu-Gi posted:

Really should have used the Brawl Link model. The old TP one is kinda shit looking now.

Oh ok, I liked it that way.
Thanks for your "review".

[Joazzz]

Ichimrau13 posted:

FIRE MY LASER!

we hate memes fyi

[Viper123_SWE]

I don't even, i guess it's kind of amusing. Not the best Gmod vid that i've seen though.

[Ichimrau13]

Joazzz posted:

we hate memes fyi

Throw a rock in my face!

Viper123_SWE posted:

I don't even, i guess it's kind of amusing. Not the best Gmod vid that i've seen though.

Oh thanks.

__
"Waiting a constructive critic"

[Joazzz]

well for one the random spazzy stuff isn't funny anymore, neither is the overexaggerated faceposing

the camera shake around the ten second mark was weird, the dubstep/disco light/camera shake/ragdoll spazzing combination at 0:40 was pointless

it drags on and on, you could have made it shorter by cutting some of the transition scenes (which mostly consist of Heavy spazzing around and yelling (with the same voice clip none the less) anyway)

[Ichimrau13]

Joazzz posted:

well for one the random spazzy stuff isn't funny anymore, neither is the overexaggerated faceposing

the camera shake around the ten second mark was weird, the dubste/disco light/camera shake/ragdoll spazzing combination at 0:40 was pointless

it drags on and on, you could have made it shorter by cutting some of the transition scenes (which mostly consist of Heavy spazzing around and yelling (with the same voice clip none the less) anyway)

Now it's something decent, warlord.
But I will ignore
Thanks ^^

[Digimutant]

I don't think ignoring criticism is a good idea. Nevertheless it's ok but it's not very very funny.

[Joazzz]

Ichimrau13 posted:

But I will ignore

who the fuck do you think you are

[Cone]

Ichimrau13 posted:

Now it's something decent, warlord.

this is what happens when you learn English from Modern Warfare 3

"WARLORD ACTUAL WE HAVE A SHITTY GMOD MACHINIMA CONFIRMED, PLEASE ADVISE"

[Ichimrau13]

Joazzz posted:

who the fuck do you think you are

And you, who do you think is

Edited:

This video is kind of tricky to do
Get a good time doing it, and a lot of fat talking shit.
Yes I not speak English.
Stop if you feel rebels

[Ninja Nub[NOR]]

wat

[Cone]

i've felt a lot of rebels, should i stop now or what?

[Death_God]

english motherfucker do you speak it

[LunaBadger]

wait, how did you made this

[Ichimrau13]

wtf?
I bet no one is here for the watch video
I think you have never made a video of gmod
I expected a united community and with an open mind. I was disappointed about that
I only see haters children

[Ex-President]

Ichimrau13 posted:

wtf?
I bet no one is here for the watch video
I think you have never made a video of gmod
I expected a united community and with an open mind. I was disappointed about that
I only see haters children

Then what the fuck were you expecting? A belly rub?

We told you what we didn't like about it and now your pissed, seriously?

And about the video of Gmod video, it doesn't take a chef to say a dish is crap.

So if you don't expect people to not like your video (which will happen) then why did you post it in the first place?

Oh and one more thing, I'd rather see a boring Garry's Mod video than a shitty one full of random memes.

[Ichimrau13]

Ex-President posted:

Then what the fuck were you expecting? A belly rub?

We told you what we didn't like about it and now your pissed, seriously?

And about the video of Gmod video, it doesn't take a chef to say a dish is crap.

So if you don't expect people to not like your video (which will happen) then why did you post it in the first place?

Oh and one more thing, I'd rather see a boring Garry's Mod video than a shitty one full of random memes.

1 meme.
And I did not even know this shit was meme
It's a video of random GMOD.
Apparently you must have gmod video, send it to me
I guess none of you have made a video of GMOD

Edited:

Of course you need to understand GMOD
This does not need logic, it is random
Will study on the subject

[Ex-President]

Ichimrau13 posted:

1 meme.
And I did not even know this shit was meme
It's a video of random GMOD.
Apparently you must have gmod video, send it to me
I guess none of you have made a video of GMOD

Edited:

Of course you need to understand GMOD
This does not need logic, it is random
Will study on the subject

"And about the video of Gmod video, it doesn't take a chef to say a dish is crap. "

One meme? Fus Ro Dah, dubstep remix, the whole sandvich TF2 thing (which if well done, can be good but not in your case).

[Ichimrau13]

Ex-President posted:

"And about the video of Gmod video, it doesn't take a chef to say a dish is crap. "

One meme? Fus Ro Dah, dubstep remix, the whole sandvich TF2 thing (which if well done, can be good but not in your case).

You already made ​​a video of gmod?

[znalecc]

Ichimrau13 posted:

You already made ​​a video of gmod?

I'm sorry, are you from the past?

[Lolkork]

Ichimrau13 posted:

You already made ​​a video of gmod?

You don't have to be a chef to say that the soup tastes like piss.

[Joazzz]

i watched the video, all of it. found numerous flaws, described some of them in that post of mine

Ichimrau13 posted:

You already made ​​a video of gmod?

i don't have to be a cook to say your food tastes like shit

good job missing the point entirely lol



take the critique, show it up your stuck-up butthole and improve or quit, you won't find any love with that attitude here. how old are you anyway, 13?

[Ichimrau13]

wtf?
I arrive in a video and say that it makes most sense. Without knowing that this is so.
Of course you have to know a little about the subject.
Show for a non layman subject, he will say - "WTF?"

[Ex-President]

Ichimrau13 posted:

You already made ​​a video of gmod?

Ok, since you can't get it through your fucking skull,

The phrase "It doesn't take a chef to say a dish is crap." means that someone doesn't need to master the skill to say something negative. Have you ever had something to eat that you didn't like? Did the chef ever tell you "Haters are all false and I am the one true chef!"? No I don't think he/she did because it was criticism. Same goes for movies, you don't need to direct something to say that it's crap. So no, I have not made a "video of Gmod" but I dunno why your so pissed off at people criticizing you because you made a not so good video.

Sorry I'm late on posting it but the point still stands.

[znalecc]

Ichimrau13 posted:

wtf?
I arrive in a video and say that it makes most sense. Without knowing that this is so.
Of course you have to know a little about the subject.
Show for a non layman subject, he will say - "WTF?"

Okay, so after all of this, I'll just assume you're a troll.

[Ichimrau13]

Joazzz posted:

i watched the video, all of it. found numerous flaws, described some of them in that post of mine

i don't have to be a cook to say your food tastes like shit

good job missing the point entirely lol



take the critique, show it up your stuck-up butthole and improve or quit, you won't find any love with that attitude here. how old are you anyway, 13?

random number ...

Edited:

I'm not upset.
Just sad about this situation

Edited:

None of you made ​​a video of gmod
I'm starting to understand things

[RoblixWW2]

@Ichimrau:

[Ichimrau13]

RoblixWW2 posted:

@Ichimrau:

Wow,As you are wicked expensive

[PeejsterM]

Ichimrau13 posted:

(Only if you have already made ​​a video of gmod)

Anybody can critique your stuff, they don't have to have experience. A person can know perfectly well what makes a good GMOD video, without actually having finished one.

As for me, I think you should keep the use of text to a minimum.
Heavy getting cash from the box would be better illustrated by having the cash pop out from above.

There should be a much greater variation in faces. For the majority of the video, he seemed to have almost the very same facial expression.

[Lolkork]

Ichimrau13 posted:

None of you made ​​a video of gmod
I'm starting to understand things

You only need to know what makes a good video to be able to critique a video.

[Ichimrau13]

PeejsterM posted:

Anybody can critique your stuff, they don't have to have experience. A person can know perfectly well what makes a good GMOD video, without actually having finished one.

As for me, I think you should keep the use of text to a minimum.
Heavy getting cash from the box would be better illustrated by having the cash pop out from above.

There should be a much greater variation in faces. For the majority of the video, he seemed to have almost the very same facial expression.

Thanks man, you were the most friendly
Yes of course, all that has no experience may find bad or good.
But if the guy does not know how the style of the video, this will find strange, does not agree?
ex
Show a video of gmod for her grandmother.
She will not understand

[PeejsterM]

Ichimrau13 posted:

Thanks man, you were the most friendly
Yes of course, all that has no experience may find bad or good.
But if the guy does not know how the style of the video, this will find strange, does not agree?
ex
Show a video of gmod for her grandmother.
She will not understand

That comparison doesn't work. The reason your grandmother wouldn't understand is because she's never watched a GMOD video, not because she's never made one.

[Lolkork]

Ichimrau13 posted:

Thanks man, you were the most friendly
Yes of course, all that has no experience may find bad or good.
But if the guy does not know how the style of the video, this will find strange, does not agree?
ex
Show a video of gmod for her grandmother.
She will not understand

The best kind of humour is the kind that anyone can enjoy, if you just rely on references and injokes almost no one will be able to appreciate your work. I completely understand that this video is aimed at 12 to 15 year olds but I don't really see why you would post it on a forum where most people are older than that.

[Ichimrau13]

Lolkork posted:

You only need to know what makes a good video to be able to critique a video.

I understand that
But nobody does constructive criticism
It's so easy just say shit

Edited:

This was my second video of gmod
For comments on this topic, this guys do not seem "adult"

Edited:

[znalecc]

Ichimrau13 posted:

I understand that
But nobody does constructive criticism
It's so easy just say shit

Edited:

This was my second video of gmod
For comments on this topic, this guys do not seem "adult"

I'm sorry, are you just blind or mentally ill? Joazz gave you some criticism and you said ''HEHEHEH THANKS, BUT I'LL IGNORE WHAT YOU SAID!''

Do you even know where you are? Do you even realize that? I mean, they've given you what you asked for and then you went ape shit, about how they've never made a Gmod video before and how they don't know shit about what you do.

Now, buddy, are you a troll?

[Ichimrau13]

Arguing about it is not going nowhere
I'll stop, I need to live.
If anyone was offended I'm sorry :(

[Lolkork]

Okay.

The posing and faceposing is awful, if you want your videos to look good you need to put some more time in to them. Posing is not easy and takes a lot of time. And just seeing the heavy spazzing around with thruster isn't funny, at all. That joke is older than gmod.
Take away all the travel sequences (for example 0:25-0:27) and pointless camera panning. It just drags out the video.