[Niko_38]

Not the most original title I know. I'm not sure whether or not this is thread worthy but the screenshot thread doesn't usually yield much critique. I'd love to hear how I can improve.

[Blitzkrieg Zero]

I love the posing.

[Niko_38]

Blitzkrieg Zero posted:

I love the posing.

Thanks! If anything, that's my strong side.

[cheesecurls]

the angle is really nice too

[AFewOstriches]

Work on your lighting a bit. Aside from that this is pretty good.

[theobod]

The posing and angle is really good, just one question tho,its that a zombie piggyback riding an other zombie in the mitle? And zombies with same shirts is the worst type of zombie. Fuck, I hate typing a comment on FP with a phone.

[The Gobo]

I like that there's a guy giving a girl a piggy back ride.

[UTSTriggerhappy]

I'm going to say that I really like the idea you've got here, and that it is actually quite good. But if you'd like some critique on how to improve, I'm happy to share my opinion.

The zombies on the left hand side look confused which makes them rather awkwardly posed. It looks like they lack interest and intensity. It would look better if it was more clear that their objective was to stop these survivors. If they were facing them and running toward them, it would create more drama. What you did on the right side with the three zombies is a good/successful example of what I mean.

For me, consistency in with the characters I use is important to me. It creates more depth and helps develop more a story, even if it's clear. This is more of a personal preference, but maybe you might appeal to it as well. When I select ragdolls, I make sure that if they are all related in some way, I limit myself. To me, having a riot soldier, a military soldier, a hazmat soldier (Three government/military soldiers) as well as survivors all crammed into one scene makes it kinda busy. But maybe its just me.

I may sound harsh but I mean well! :) Other than what I mentioned, I think its a great picture! It's not easy to get a critique out of people I find. I don't hear many opinions/critiques on how to improve on my pictures, but I wont be that person :P Hope this helps in your future scenes!

[Niko_38]

Thanks for the critique everyone! I think I'll go back and have another look at making the lighting more crisp and interesting to look at. Aside from that, now that you mention it, I can see that the zombies on the left doesn't look nearly as angry and determined as the ones on the right, which really takes away from the overall tension of the scene. That will obviously need fixing too.

[Cone]

it's a bit colorless but yeah that's some very lovely posing you got there