1. Post #1
    4FunTV's Avatar
    January 2012
    62 Posts
    Okay, last picture was a piece of smith so here's a better one.
    It presents a squadron doing a reconnaissance in a Swamp Area, somewhere-nowhere.
    Added an old photo style to make it look climatic.
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  2. Post #2
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    Viper123_SWE's Avatar
    May 2011
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    Posing is good but can be improved, i'm not too fond of the filter and if that is supposed to be Vietnam there should be tropical trees not something that could be in Canada/US/Russia/Sweden.
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  3. Post #3
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    GHOST!!!!'s Avatar
    November 2006
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    His hand should either be twirling two fingers (Stack Up) or a fist (Hold Position) if it's like that...I think.
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  4. Post #4
    4FunTV's Avatar
    January 2012
    62 Posts
    Posing is good but can be improved, i'm not too fond of the filter and if that is supposed to be Vietnam there should be tropical trees not something that could be in Canada/US/Russia/Sweden.
    I was looking up for some neat tropical map in Workshop but didn't found one.
    So i used "super hiper professional two words" somewhere-nowhere.

    Edited:

    His hand should either be twirling two fingers (Stack Up) or a fist (Hold Position) if it's like that...I think.
    He's rather twisting his finger to rally up.

  5. Post #5
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    Viper123_SWE's Avatar
    May 2011
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    I was looking up for some neat tropical map in Workshop but didn't found one.
    So i used "super hiper professional two words" somewhere-nowhere.
    Oh, okay then. You know, there's alot of good props so that you can do your own tropical map with a scenebuild, it takes a while but you get better results.

  6. Post #6
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    GHOST!!!!'s Avatar
    November 2006
    4,518 Posts
    If I'm going to make a proper comment or, C&C, it's that you should've given them M16's instead of AK47's, you know because it'd fit more, loosen up the guy on the back right, he looks stiff as fuck, having him hunched over a little bit and holding his shotgun from the hip would look better, and having him rotated more to his right so it's more natural looking.

  7. Post #7
    4FunTV's Avatar
    January 2012
    62 Posts
    If I'm going to make a proper comment or, C&C, it's that you should've given them M16's instead of AK47's, you know because it'd fit more, loosen up the guy on the back right, he looks stiff as fuck, having him hunched over a little bit and holding his shotgun from the hip would look better, and having him rotated more to his right so it's more natural looking.
    As you wish sir.

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  8. Post #8
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    January 2012
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    I will once again refer you to this thread. Frankly, the stuff you've been putting out, this included, is not worthy of its own thread. Get better, lurk a while, then come back and make your own threads.

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    No one cares if you say shit, man. 'Piece of smith' makes you sound like you're six.
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    GHOST!!!!'s Avatar
    November 2006
    4,518 Posts
    Given the way he's typed already I wouldn't be surprised if he was fairly young.

  10. Post #10
    4FunTV's Avatar
    January 2012
    62 Posts
    Welp, you guys are right, I am young. I'm also foreign so I type english the way you see. But not too young to don't type english properly.
    Also I got this "smith" word stuck in my head due to Gmod Tower addiction.

  11. Post #11
    Gazzyer's Avatar
    November 2012
    44 Posts
    Nice War picture, Truley like the old film grain and the brown colouring, Makes the realism come right up.

  12. Post #12
    Piett's Avatar
    September 2008
    551 Posts
    The SPAS-12 is a bit anachronistic for 1972. The Soldiers (I presume are US Soldiers) would have M16A1 instead of an AK (Though by the looks of the AK, there a bit anachronistic as well sincethey appear to be AK-74s).
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  13. Post #13
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    March 2010
    465 Posts
    Maybe it's just me, but the because of the filter on top I couldn't tell they were in water at first. It looked like they were all warped. But it may have just been me. I do like the photo though, I just had to take a second glance to get it all.