1. Post #1
    Airborne8254's Avatar
    July 2010
    102 Posts
    PLAY!!!!!!!!!:

    http://youtu.be/1D3iNEAT7Js

    http://youtu.be/GkpdoIG5Ykw


    Not the greatest but i thought it was worthy of uploadedness

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  2. Post #2
    Schmoes's Avatar
    July 2011
    489 Posts
    I like the idea, but the blood looks too fake for me.
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  3. Post #3
    Dennab
    July 2009
    2,257 Posts
    Try bluring the blood a little, or even less blood and more smoke? Not bad though
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  4. Post #4
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    AFewOstriches's Avatar
    January 2012
    1,819 Posts
    I like it. Posing's pretty good. The upper left area seems a bit bare, though. Trying not to beat a dead horse here, but the blood does need work.

    <nitpicking> Try moving the camera closer to the chopper next time. It'll look more like the pilot's view while narrowing your overall view of the field, which is good since you can then pack that area with more NVA and asplosions and stuff.
    </nitpicking>

  5. Post #5
    Blitzkrieg Zero's Avatar
    August 2011
    2,725 Posts
    Well, if I'm going to nitpick, the pilot isn't an actual pilot, but rather just a G.I. I think theres a Vietnam-era pilot in the Kuma War pack or something.

    That aside, its alright. The posing is decent, the smoke is pretty good, but the blood and the grass look odd. The blood should probably be blurred more, and the grass should cover the ground more. Also, the angle could be better. Zooming in to show just the bottom half of the helicopter and the gun wouldn't be too bad. Well, thats just my opinion anyway. A few more trees would look better too.

    Overall, not bad.

  6. Post #6
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    Joazzz's Avatar
    June 2008
    26,040 Posts
    i see what you're trying to do with the blood and smoke effects, and i like it, but right now everything looks flat and cartoony. make the blood darker and maybe less saturated and shade the dust.

  7. Post #7
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    the tee's Avatar
    December 2010
    1,415 Posts
    Like how smoke looks, but needs more work. Other than good job.

  8. Post #8
    VaciliNikoMav's Avatar
    January 2012
    1,411 Posts
    "anyone who runs, is a VC, anyone who stays still is a very TRAINED VC."
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