[DarkPineapple]

I realise this is amateur but I like to think i am getting better

[Amy Pond]

The tank looks weird.

[DarkPineapple]

I've only just realised the tank is on its tip toes

[DELTA440]

he needs a bigger gun lol

[lolz3]

[Gromitooth]

Looks low quality to be truthful. AND NICK. Why you make such ugly faces at the beautiful tank?

[Chonch]

Nick looks like he's severely constipated. Imagine if you were in that situation. Apply a face that makes sense to you.

Default blood decals are low quality and not very pretty, try to avoid them in the future.

Nick's lower body has a bit of an odd spot about halfway down his torso. Make sure to pick out those little errors and fix them before taking the screenshot; it really breaks the mood of the picture.

Your Tanks and zombies are floating. To give the impression of movement, try adding some motion blur to the rear of their bodies.

Scene props are very out of place and lack shadows. Try using lamps to get a shadow that you can mess around with.

[DetectiveNB]

Maybe I'm wrong but it looks like his arm is in view of the impending horde. But let's see what nick can do with a single hand gun to a couple tanks.

[MaikkiBoi]

Is Nick taking cover from zombies?

[Azzator]

Simple DoF

it buuurrnnns

[gtanoofa]

[Killer112]

Why am I seeing so many mistakes in this.

1. Please don't use .jpeg, it screws up the image quality. Use .png instead.

2. Do I even need to mention Nick's face

3. The zombies seem to be floating.

4. Don't use Simple DoF. Even if Super DoF makes your computer lag, please use it. It makes the images look so much better.

5. Some of the objects lack shadows.

6. There's a jagged (or whatever) spot on Nick's waist.

7. The gun is clipping through Nick's hand.

etc. etc.

[Ninja Nub[NOR]]

Killer112 posted:

1. Please don't use .jpeg, it screws up the image quality. Use .png instead.

Or Jpeg Quality 100
Because Png files take ages to load yo

[Mr. So and So]

Just change the difficulty. He'll live.