[Fussy!]

If the music dosen't start at 3 minutes in, please play it from there.

Decided to bring the Augast concept back to life after two years.

[Viper123_SWE]

The scenery is good, and the posing is good.
Nice work! :)

[Loen]

Here, have a critique chatlog between me and Chesty:

9:46 AM - Loen: posing on the guy holding up his hands is p. weird
9:46 AM - ChestyMcGee: i don't mind it
9:46 AM - ChestyMcGee: got the impression of stepping down the step down pretty well
9:46 AM - Loen: huh i didn't notice the step
9:47 AM - ChestyMcGee: there's something off about the whole pic but i dunno what it is. maybe the background is too busy... i'm not sure
9:47 AM - Loen: ye i can see what you mean
9:47 AM - Loen: could be more out of focus
9:48 AM - ChestyMcGee: i dunno if more blur is necessary
9:48 AM - ChestyMcGee: you can defocus something by lots of other means
9:48 AM - Loen: different angle then
9:49 AM - Loen: the lighting could be blending better, and the green highlights are bugging me a bit
9:49 AM - Loen: not sure where they're coming from :v
9:49 AM - ChestyMcGee: the door the white shirt dude is coming from i think
9:49 AM - ChestyMcGee: not sure how it reaches the foreground
9:49 AM - ChestyMcGee: looks pretty cool though
9:49 AM - Loen: ye
9:50 AM - Loen: would of worked better if there was a stronger lightsource in front of the foreground
9:50 AM - Loen: and also help the contrast n make the background stand out less
9:50 AM - ChestyMcGee: yeh the foreground guys need an extra lightsource
9:50 AM - ChestyMcGee: good point
9:51 AM - Loen: if it weren't for those green highlights at the moment then the contrast would be all fucked up and the background would look REALLY busy

[Fussy!]

Loen posted:

Here, have a critique chatlog between me and Chesty:

9:46 AM - Loen: posing on the guy holding up his hands is p. weird
9:46 AM - ChestyMcGee: i don't mind it
9:46 AM - ChestyMcGee: got the impression of stepping down the step down pretty well
9:46 AM - Loen: huh i didn't notice the step
9:47 AM - ChestyMcGee: there's something off about the whole pic but i dunno what it is. maybe the background is too busy... i'm not sure
9:47 AM - Loen: ye i can see what you mean
9:47 AM - Loen: could be more out of focus
9:48 AM - ChestyMcGee: i dunno if more blur is necessary
9:48 AM - ChestyMcGee: you can defocus something by lots of other means
9:48 AM - Loen: different angle then
9:49 AM - Loen: the lighting could be blending better, and the green highlights are bugging me a bit
9:49 AM - Loen: not sure where they're coming from :v
9:49 AM - ChestyMcGee: the door the white shirt dude is coming from i think
9:49 AM - ChestyMcGee: not sure how it reaches the foreground
9:49 AM - ChestyMcGee: looks pretty cool though
9:49 AM - Loen: ye
9:50 AM - Loen: would of worked better if there was a stronger lightsource in front of the foreground
9:50 AM - Loen: and also help the contrast n make the background stand out less
9:50 AM - ChestyMcGee: yeh the foreground guys need an extra lightsource
9:50 AM - ChestyMcGee: good point
9:51 AM - Loen: if it weren't for those green highlights at the moment then the contrast would be all fucked up and the background would look REALLY busy

Now this is what I need, stuff like this is great.