[PoliceTcheque]

Hi everbody ! Here is my first video on Gmod, I'd like some feedback on it !

Here is it :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h548m...LIE5Eh_tYQRko3


Thanks !

[Disseminate]

- use original content. do not borrow stuff from overworked unfunny series.
- there are ten million videos identical to this one - the 'static interspaced skits' thing hasn't been funny in years
- it was much longer than it needed to be
- faceposer messups are only funny in context
- do not use your voice
- use source recorder to remove lag

[PoliceTcheque]

Thanks for the advices ! I'll keep this in mind for my next video ! It's only my first one and your advices will be very helpful for me !

[Cobaiye]

Disseminate, I think you're a little bit tough... I think he's doing it pretty well for a first try. I subbed to your channel, I want to see how you're improving by the time.

[PoliceTcheque]

Thanks Cobaiye ! Don't worry I'm gonna improve ! By the way there is a video I made after this one :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Owcgz...ure=plpp_video

[Cobaiye]

That's a lot better mate !

[PoliceTcheque]

Thanks again mate ! :D