It's an interesting start, but the animations seem to take too long sometimes, if you can speed them up a bit so that we're not waiting long for a single scene to play out it'd be better.
Also the text when the ghost-y princess shows up sometimes moves too fast, and I occasionally had to pause it to read it. It would also be better if you didn't use a script-y looking font for that part because its harder to read. Also there was no reason to extend the blank screen at the end just so you could play the entire background song. Just fade out or something.
Apart from that I am interested to see what happens next.
points taken, thank you. i see what you're talking about, i'll make a note to ensure readability for the text if i do that kind of thing again. i'm still working on speeding up scenes, too. it's something i've been trying to improve upon for a while now. and as for the music playing unneccicarily at the end....i didn't notice that untill after i submitted to Youtube...gonna have to watch for that from here on out.
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