[FPSNations]

Hi guys, I made a Gmod machinima...

I think you might like it.

[Jacknife]

hahahaha.

[FPSNations]

Thanks. It's my first episode! I'm glad someone enjoys it... I'm thinking about doing a 4th or 5th episode... But I've lost my machinima feel... Anybody can do it now. BUT YOU MUST GIVE ME CREDIT!!!

[znalecc]

I think you might like it.

Nope.avi

Honestly, it's just you, running around, killing Combines with HUD on and shit...

There's not a single thing I like about it.

[TheGoodDoctorF]

Oh come on!
I can hear you picking up the fucking items around the map in the opening
(if you can call it an opening)

The text appears for about 2 seconds, so you cant read it unless your a god at reading.
The dialouge is poorly written anyways. "Bang band, your dead"? Who the fuck says that?

I appreciate you trying to tell us a... story? But next time, put some more effort into it rather then just use cool sweps to kill NPC's.

I will give you that you are trying something different rather then spazzy ragdolls in an attempt to be funny. At least your attempting to do something different. Keep going at it, and I'm sure you'll improve.

[Ninja Nub[NOR]]

Enjoy-ha-wow-why-I don't even

[Jacknife]

FPSNations posted:

Thanks. It's my first episode! I'm glad someone enjoys it... I'm thinking about doing a 4th or 5th episode... But I've lost my machinima feel... Anybody can do it now. BUT YOU MUST GIVE ME CREDIT!!!

I didn't enjoy it.

[FPSNations]

"Bang Bang, your dead" is the catchline... Seriously, it was for humor. And bear in mind THIS was my first episode. Don't get all worked up. I'm not some Steven Spielberg ya know. If you want to read the text YOU HAVE TO PAUSE IT! PAUSE IT! And... my opening was a bit poor back then... Keep in mind THAT was my first machinima episode... The second and third episode ARE much better...

Edited:

Jacknife posted:

I didn't enjoy it.

Yeah... I know... I need someone to... you know... FIX IT. I need someone to take the idea or story and make a PROPER machinima out of it.... Yes... I've given up on the machinima.... Kind of funny huh? Yeah...

Edited:

znalecc posted:

Nope.avi

Honestly, it's just you, running around, killing Combines with HUD on and shit...

There's not a single thing I like about it.

Yeah... I know... But umm.... that was MY first episode. Since then I've improved. Back then I WAS a bit stupid and I didn't REALLY know how to make machinima... I'm thinking of making a BRAND NEW Machinima... but no hud and shit.... promise.

[Prototype556]

FPSNations posted:

"Bang Bang, your dead" is the catchline... Seriously, it was for humor. And bear in mind THIS was my first episode. Don't get all worked up. I'm not some Steven Spielberg ya know. If you want to read the text YOU HAVE TO PAUSE IT! PAUSE IT! And... my opening was a bit poor back then... Keep in mind THAT was my first machinima episode... The second and third episode ARE much better...
Edited:




Yeah... I know... I need someone to... you know... FIX IT. I need someone to take the idea or story and make a PROPER machinima out of it.... Yes... I've given up on the machinima.... Kind of funny huh? Yeah...

Edited:




Yeah... I know... But umm.... that was MY first episode. Since then I've improved. Back then I WAS a bit stupid and I didn't REALLY know how to make machinima... I'm thinking of making a BRAND NEW Machinima... but no hud and shit.... promise.

Why don't you calm down? They are telling you what they thought about it, no need to flame.

[exhale77]

Oh, it's one of THESE guys again.

[Jacknife]

Prototype556 posted:

Why don't you calm down? They are telling you what they thought about it, no need to flame.

He's not flaming.


woooooow.

[Spectre1406]

Lame.

[FPSNations]

Never mind...


I'll just stick to...
Making gameplay videos....
I've given up machinima now.

[Midtown123]

FPSNations posted:

I've given up machinima now.

hahaha how old are you

If someone criticizes your work it means they care and want you to get better, just so you know.

[Dachande]

this is terrible
a machinima usually has a story, or at barebones is just funny.
this was neither, and pained me to watch. im suprised i actually had the commitment to watch it through half-way

Edited:

to be constructive:
stop. these kinds of videos arent going to attract anyone. you need to learn what makes up a good machinima, go watch a few.

[FPSNations]

Yeah... Umm....

I haven't really made Gmod machinima...
I REALLY need some help.
REALLY!
I'm thinking of making a scary machininma...