Well. Nice. The first version is better, IMO. Some of them look a bit stiff, but otherwise its good for someone just starting.
Finger posing on the guy on the left seems off.
"EDIT: CRAAP! Just saw that I forgot to pose his hand on the foregrip. I posed it, put did not make him fully grip it. My bad."
Yeah, I noticed that afterwards. It sucks, but oh well.
Me gusta the coloring on the first one, how did you do it?
I'll PM you about it.