[Master Mates]

Nothing too special. Just a quick pose I thought up after listening to the relaxing, euphoria that is the sound of a cello.

[bucket_face]

No man should cross his legs like that.

[Master Mates]

bucket_face posted:

No man should cross his legs like that.

Anything else wrong with it? I gladly accept helpful criticisim.

Edited:

So the only thing that's going to be said is that he's sitting funny? Ouch...

[Crazy Knife]

Idk, i cross my legs like that all the time. I would refer to the fact that his eyes are excessively open as a criticism. Make them either look down or slightly close i would say.

[ChestyMcGee]

he looks like he's wincing. his bottom lids are closing but his top lids are open. it's weird. looks like he's mentally unstable

Edited:

bucket_face posted:

No man should cross his legs like that.

why? it's not a typically working-class thing to do and it can be considered quite camp among a lot of people but i know a few guys who sit like that

granted they're quite camp but so what? maybe that character in the background is a middle/upper-class kinda guy or maybe he's just camp

[Master Mates]

ChestyMcGee posted:

he looks like he's wincing. his bottom lids are closing but his top lids are open. it's weird. looks like he's mentally unstable

I never repositioned his eyelids, so I think it might just be the angle of the shot, but I'll definitely remember to give more time to making my characters look less crazy in the eyes.