[The Combine]

Decided to start redoing every picture I hated back in the day I made it. So here is number one:
Critism is appreciated!


Early Version:
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20...he_Combine.jpg

New Version:

[gtanoofa]

The rain looks 2D and his expression seems wrong, like he is actually just really mad at the sniper, as if i had been hit by a bow where he did i would be spitting blood and would be with one foot into the grave(look like shit and be almost dead).

Edited:

The fingerposing is not looking good too.

[Typhoonx10]

The snipers arms look wrong.

[Zeraxify]

I think the posing is too stiff.

[A big fat ass]

My main complaint is the rain. Too small, too 2D(there should be dozens of variations in sizes because it rains all over, not just on one axis) and it should be splattering.

[Chonch]

Original looked better IMO.

[TheGoodDoctorF]

I feel as if the rain should be bouncing on them