[Airborne8254]

yeeep

[ChestyMcGee]

wow photobucket loading times

Edited:

oh okay there we go. posing is really stiff and the composition is pretty poor

too much empty foreground and not enough breathing space for the characters
no idea what the guys are doing or what they're looking at, especially the guy on the right

fog is nice

[yujin110]

Perhaps they are struck frozen in fear.

or at least the man on the left is.

[Sanitizer]

ChestyMcGee posted:

no idea what the guys are doing or what they're looking at, especially the guy on the right

You need to get glasses.

[ChestyMcGee]

Sanitizer posted:

You need to get glasses.

why? the dude on the right is staring off-screen. not at those zombies. at all. or at least the direction of his head implies that

you don't need glasses but you sure as hell need to improve your attention to detail

[Sanitizer]

ChestyMcGee posted:

why? the dude on the right is staring off-screen. not at those zombies. at all. or at least the direction of his head implies that

you don't need glasses but you sure as hell need to improve your attention to detail

Your right about the right guy's head, but their intentions are pretty clear.

[Exorade]

The zombie on the left is like "We dun' like your kind around here."
And the zombie on the right is like "Come on Marv, we dun' want no trouble. They're armed."

[halo_224]

I like it, if anything though it's a little boring.