[callumfish]

My First Screenshot


C&C is welcome, but no hate comments, it is my first.

[Wilford Brimley]

What am I looking at.

[mac338]

The lighting is pretty bad, use the lamp tool to set up a spotlight. Furthermore, the scenebuild is pretty bad and unrealistic, or at least I have yet to see a ceiling composed of blastdoors. The posing and the motive itself ain't all bad and with some hard work I believe you can make some awesome poses. Oh, and remember to use super DoF a lot, always fixes up your pictures.

[callumfish]

okay thanks for the advice:)

[Jacknife]

I knew it was going to be bad due to the msiatke in the title

They're not there

[Lunik]

The thumb looks like it's dislocated

If I could give you a tip: if the pose doesn't seem right, try doing it in real life and get a feel of what it actually looks like.

[Araknid]

THERE
THEY'RE

[Devil Traitor]

Wilford Brimley posted:

What am I looking at?

Nothing.

[cr2142]

Its best to not Post your First screenshot. Other then that, I like your Fingerposing, it just needs bit of improving though.

[Cabbage]

THEY'RE

[Spectre1406]

Finger posing is poorly executed.

[mac338]

Can people give this guy some constructive criticism beyond telling him how he spelled the thread title wrong? He came here for help to get better at posing, so some well written critique would surely be appreciated.

[Cabbage]

mac338 posted:

Can people give this guy some constructive criticism beyond telling him how he spelled the thread title wrong? He came here for help to get better at posing, so some well written critique would surely be appreciated.

Why come HERE for posing support.

[Jacknife]

RubberFruit posted:

Why come HERE for posing support.

Yeah, why not THERE

[muffin_top]

Use some lamps. I can't see the picture very well.

[mac338]

RubberFruit posted:

Why come HERE for posing support.

Because people often overlook the poses in the "Post your pose" thread and there's a small chance of getting proper criticism. As shitty as it may be, the chance is at least higher if he posts it as a thread. ( No I don't think it's thread worthy but you might as well give him some critique now that it's posed. )