[Hairybastard]

I havent posed in AGES so I decided to make something. I also couldn't come up with a better thread title. so .. yeah here you go.

Also, please do compare!
http://filesmelt.com/dl/orginalfaggot.png
And yeah, it's a scenebuild, a very crappy one.

Please C&C! :)

[halo_224]

Looks good!

Wish I could make pretty portals like you.

[Ninja Nub[NOR]]

I like this, so to any extent of what it means from a rookie like me, I say, good job.

[Srgt. Shotup]

The lighting looks very snazzy. There's something about the laser that seems a tiny bit off, though. Too opaque, maybe?

[Hairybastard]

Srgt. Shotup posted:

The lighting looks very snazzy. There's something about the laser that seems a tiny bit off, though. Too opaque, maybe?

Yeah I have always been bad at making lasers, but I still included it to show it's a turret. I couldn't find any models of an open turret so offscreen is what I'm left with..

[lonefirewarrior]

The laser needs more white in the center. Other than that, nice job.

[ChestyMcGee]

as a tip for lasers, you can try very slightly erasing it in parts with a cloud brush of sorts. do it randomly and erratically and it makes it look a little less like a perfect straight line

[rikimaru6811]

Why can't i have AA?

Anyway, great job

[Svyatoslav]

Love it. Really reminds me Portal 2.

[The_J_Hat]

Maddening indeed. Nice posing and editing.

[KaNe1310]

I wish some of the shadows wouldnt be so rough. soft shadows wouldve made this picture even better.

[Joazzz]

You should use some blending modes man. The laser and the tracers look too... solid. They overlap stuff weirdly.

[Crazy Knife]

Beautiful edit and action angle