[CoolHandLuke]

Give me constructive criticism, and hurtful.

This is my first model, on gm_construct.

I figured I would start something easy on a simple map.

[Apollo2947]

The gun on the right seems to be magically floating and the right guy's arm is too stiff

and I know your just starting on a simple map but just look online for a WWII map

[CoolHandLuke]

Apollo2947 posted:

The gun on the right seems to be magically floating and the right guy's arm is too stiff

and I know your just starting on a simple map but just look online for a WWII map

About the gun, we can say he dropped it.

[Apollo2947]

Eh, alright. But I wouldn't make it so parallel to the ground

[Slim Charles]

It's okay for a first try, Next time try and use a more detailed map and some post processing stuff.

Also Improve on your posing

[7H3_H4CK3R]

Work on your posing, a lot. Get a better map aswell, you may want some post processing to spice it up a bit too.

[Jacknife]

It's not ok for a first try, never ever post your first time stuff.

[Winters]

Seeing as I'm fairly new to posing as well I don't know if I can actually give advice but, the map you choose can really improve the whole "feel" of a pose. Also, a thing I like to do while posing is standing up and doing the action I want to pose myself so I can give it a more natural feel, no offense or anything but they look rather unnatural and stiff.

[muffin_top]

[GMgregster]

The thing I don't get is.....why are they all looking forward, while the rocket is coming at them to the right of them? And why are they just sitting there? I would get the fuck out of there if there was a rocket coming at me.