[Biscuit-Boy]

I have been up for exactly 24 hours without sleep, and have produced 2 poses of which I am very proud, and a third that hasn't gotten rated dumb yet to my knowledge. I thought this particular pose was a lost cause initially until I tried a gradient and saved the entire background ("saved"). It's still wwaaaaayy over the top but I'm so sleep deprived that at this point that I think I'd better stop editing before I end up downloading MLP ragdolls. I hope you enjoy it, it was awesome making it. C&C is welcome as always, but there's a chance I'm aware of whatever is wrong, I just can't fathom a way to fix it.




I'm aware of :

-Oversaturated everything
-Low res poorly lit model
-Background is nuts
-Messy
-"jpeg_quality 90" (dammit)

[Spirit_Breaker]

Well, if you are aware of those stuff, why not fix it?

It looks super messy and there are too many stars in there.

[Blitzkrieg Zero]

Spirit_Breaker posted:

Well, if you are aware of those stuff, why not fix it?

It looks super messy and there are too many stars in there.

Biscuit-Boy posted:

but there's a chance I'm aware of whatever is wrong, I just can't fathom a way to fix it.

Looks nice. Except the things you pointed out.

[Biscuit-Boy]

Spirit_Breaker posted:

Well, if you are aware of those stuff, why not fix it?

It looks super messy and there are too many stars in there.

Pls read entire post b4 critizise. I can't fix it, there's no way (well I'm sure there is but at the moment that's all I got). That is the only star brush pack that is large enough to span the entire image without having to upscale, and making them myself is out of the question. I can name a reason for leaving every single thing that's wrong with it, but the bottom line is that I'm happy with it as is and I'm going to keep trying, but on a different pose.

[DaysBefore]

So she's in space, and space hasn't been clear in years? Is there Space Pollution? Space Smog?

Looks alright, not a lot to criticize posing wise. Editing seems fine I guess, I really have no idea.

[TheGoodDoctorF]

"Oh god, the sky! What happened to the sky!"

[SebiWarrior]

You sir... are... being... the most... awesome... person... on Facepunch.

[Biscuit-Boy]

DaysBefore posted:

So she's in space, and space hasn't been clear in years? Is there Space Pollution? Space Smog?

Looks alright, not a lot to criticize posing wise. Editing seems fine I guess, I really have no idea.

There's a planet just a little below there that she's standing on there, it's a bit smuggy but it's nice and level so it doesn't get in the way of space when you're trying to look at space from an upwards angle when the smurg finally clears up from space. I'm tired, it made sense at the time. And besides, I don't have any futuristic buildings to do scenebuilds with so I couldn't have had anything there if I tried.

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TheGoodDoctorF posted:

"Oh god, the sky! What happened to the sky!"

Laughed hard my friend, laughed hard.

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SebiWarrior posted:

You sir... are... being... the most... awesome... person... on Facepunch.

Ahaha, thank you :D

[Bubz]

Don't let laziness slaughter imagination.

[Biscuit-Boy]

I'm not, I'm just starting over fresh, and I don't see anything wrong with that. If it's exceptionally better I may or may not start a new thread but eh.

[Mikey Mike 217]

I really love the clear visor effect. Plus that you put a Halo 3 EVA helmet on a Reach spartan.

[Biscuit-Boy]

Mikey Mike 217 posted:

I really love the clear visor effect. Plus that you put a Halo 3 EVA helmet on a Reach spartan.

Thank you! It too a while to get a transparency I liked. I was hoping for something like the polarizers in ODST but it was the best I could do. Also, the Halo 3 EVA is light years cooler than the Reach version, it was a no brainer for me haha.

[Slim Charles]

I love it!, it looks sooo darn cool!

[muffin_top]

fitting music

[PC_Paul]

Reminds me of Mass Effect

[InsanePyro]

New wallpaper got

[Biscuit-Boy]

InsanePyro posted:

New wallpaper got

Aha, you want a bigger one? I got bigger :P