[l4d2]

Hi all! Behold the story from top to bottom. And please read. :D


I found something really interesting. Rails coming into the water. I decided to follow them.

The rails stretched into infinity. I had to constantly emerge from water to breathe.

Suddenly I came across a corner. A track descended lower and lower...

Rails come into the wall and disappeared. This wall was strange. I looked at it closer.

It wasn't only a wall. It was force-field! On the second side there was no water!
On the floor was a holographic display. "Sector G".

I looked at this closer.

I saw the small room upstairs in the darkness.

I walked closer. I spotted something inside!

I decided to turn on the flashlight. Something moved! It was human!

He/it came closer to the bars. I could not see his face.

He had bad intentions. It was too late. Flashlight fell to the floor.

And I fell from the first floor to head ...
Oh! Just don't be afraid of the dark!

[Jacknife]

lol wtf

[TehAgentGuy]

What did I just see?

[Cone]

I like the idea of a comic told in first person view, it's something I wanted to try for a while.

However, give me more... well, I just don't know where to start, or convey to you where it goes wrong.

It's just bad. I'm sorry, I wish I could tell you how, and be of some help in some way. But I can't.

Again, I like how you're telling it in first person. It's an interesting concept, and one I hope to improve on. Sorry I couldn't help in some way.

[GMgregster]

Horrible posing.

[l4d2]

Ok, thanks Cone. I will try to make better stories next time. :D I like your opinions.

[Svyatoslav]

And then main character was a zombie.

[Reno360]

Slender 47.

[JurajIsNotPirat]

hydro electric

[F T]

Sector G-Spot.

[Cone]

Reno360 posted:

Slender 47.

Actually, that isn't too bad an idea. There's a Slender Man model on Garry's Mod.org...

I may have found my new project!

[BananaFoam]

I'm not entirely sure what I just saw.

WTF?

[halo_224]

I-... I have seen many works of arts lately.

I've seen a Picasso, burned into nothing more than a minute pile of ash.

The most... beautiful women- spread across my bed, their cloths non-apparent. Their intentions known to me, and mine to them.

The sun, felt as if almost only near my face, the warmth of love- two hundred miles away.

But this- this is true art. The definition of Love; my heart... in pictures and mere pixels.

You've destroyed me conception of time, meaning... and the thought of love; with anything besides this is nothing.

You have made something beyond words- each pose, every word. I fast for more! The need, a dark passenger of my own...

So please- do not frail at the calming words of my companions, oh-sweet comic you.

For you, have won my heart.