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It appears as though I am forming a coherent plot. We will see about that in future parts.
As per usual, feedback is very appreciated. Don't be shy, tell me how I suck!
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Uhm, I don't get it.
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Oh, don't worry. It's just because you're not... oh wait, I would rather not insult you. Read the comic again and pay more attention, with a little luck it'll come to you.
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PROTIP: don't act condescending to potential fans!
Other than that, not really that funny. Try to make the comic itself shorter and clutter up the panel a bit less with the speech bubbles. It makes it hard to tell who's talking.
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This.
Or am I looking too hard and the point is too obvious?
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"Would you rather haul up half a ton per crate?" What? I hope I'm not the only one that doesn't understand this line.
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You realize that this made more people read and comment on the comic? I'm enough of a jerk not to care about losing one "potential fan" or two.
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Read it again. Still don't get it.
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Great, that's an amazing way of thinking. Now I'll just quit the thread and never check your unfunny comics again. You're gonna get some comments fo shure, but not really in the way you intended 'em to be.
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Aw, that really hurt my feelings now. You mean, mean man.
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I didn't find it funny at all.
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Okay... aherm.
I just found myself becoming the worst thing that could happen to an internet forum and I am sincerely sorry. No forum deserves a troll and the reason that I originally left FP a few years back was in fact a troll invasion.
Maybe this one wasn't one of my best, but in all likelihood any comic series will have weak issues. Unfortunately here it appears to be an early one.
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I don't know, I liked it myself.
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Never make comics again.
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Okay... that's some very constructive criticism right there. Want to tell me to fuck off while you're at it?
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Sweet cardiac arrest, this is gonna get bad.
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Guys, guys, calm down. Is it really necessary to bash someone for making a comic and wanting to share it?
This is why we can't have nice things. If you didn't find it funny, that's one thing, but that's only personal opinion. It's not like you paid for the creator's effort or anything, so don't go around being a dick.
Same goes to being aggressive to someone just because they didn't like your comic. But, since Althir has already apologized, I won't go there.
Come on, peace and love, gents. We all like comics, right? So, if you think there's room for improvement, share constructive criticism. Don't be an ass.
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It's so dull.
It just is not funny.
It has no point at all... even a mediocre comic has a story.
And Mythos, your opinions are void; you are in the comic's small credits box.
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For making a skin. Inform yourself beforehand.
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Uh, nope.
I haven't a care in the world why you were in the credits.
You simply are; therefore your opinion is invalid.
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Besides:
I do not think he really wants to share with people.
If he truly cared for it he would understand that people saying this, "This is bad," means that whatever he put up sucks.
He would ask for help, if he cared, not act like a prick and respond as a (defensive) tough guy.
Tips for your next comic: make it have a point.
Start with that then try humor.
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All right, then. Although I should tell you that I was in the first comic's credits as well, and, according to the guy, I will be in all of the comics that include the red-shirt character. So I guess I can't have an opinion on anything because, apparently, doing a skin turns me into a nepotist.
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It helps that you try to support a P.O.S. comic.
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See, you can be mildly humorous. I think you just need to derive the humor from someone else rather than actively setting up the jokes.
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I'm high as fuck and this is the best damn comic I've ever read.
It's like a passive comic like combine dum dum juice of 24 series.
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What do you use to make your comics?
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The "Apartment Complex" in the comics is giving me a massive vibe of a Communist-controlled location for some reason.
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I have to admit, I don't get the point of the comic either.
Would help if you linked the first episode maybe? I assume there's a first episode.
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It doesn't help, and it's only mildly funnier.
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Depressing thing: you people call it unfunny or even piece of shit, but it's got way more views than my last comics, which people who actually replied seemed to like.
I.e. Facepunch prefers to bash someone for trying than bother replying to a comic they like.
No, I ain't butthurt, I just find it odd that people would rather make an apparently crappy comic popular than bother checking or publicizing something that others considered good. And I just talk about my case with all the modesty I can muster (which isn't much, truth be told) because I don't really know other cases.
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Most Facepunchers like to provide criticism, no matter how harsh it is. Everyone said their part about your comic, not much to say after it. We liked it. THIS comic on the other hand? The writer isn't funny, and it's all very forced.
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So I guess four people is "everybody" on Facepunch, then.
Yeah, I really have motivation to post my comics here now. Apparently, a group of people saying that a comic sucks over and over is more valuable than four people saying they liked a comic, and you'd rather bother with calling something crap and a waste of time than read something others seemed to like.
And criticism by itself is nothing if it isn't constructive. Just saying.
Ah well, I don't wish to be banned for this nor make it personal, I just don't see the logic of thirty people bashing one comic and ignoring all others.
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Facepunch is a bit like a Hive-Mind, from what I've seen. When people disagree, it's more like somebody asking questions than a domestic dispute.
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Well he did ask people on how much he sucks at making comics.....
Dumb x 2
Disagree x 1
Agree x 12
Friendly x 3
Funny x 4
Useful x 1
