1. Post #1
    Oberleutnant's Avatar
    July 2010
    88 Posts


    I realize its dark as fuck.

    C&C
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  2. Post #2
    Moonsorrow's Avatar
    October 2008
    1,156 Posts
    Can't see shit, and the little I spot seems very bland and effortless.

  3. Post #3
    AttemptedPants's Avatar
    May 2010
    851 Posts
    Yep, that's the perfect place all right. A pitch black room.
    Wonderful.

  4. Post #4
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    Cone's Avatar
    August 2011
    20,109 Posts
    "So... should we hide in the trees, or...?"

    "Nah, let's stay in the one clear area down a linear stream. They'll never see that coming."
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  5. Post #5
    Moobz's Avatar
    April 2005
    68 Posts
    You may want to look up some background depth of field tutorials and/or fog to soften up the jaggies on the trees. It'd also help to bring out the foreground to make it clearer what's going on.

    Also her left arm looks awkward dangling there, it looks as if shes reaching for something. Fingerposing will help with that, adds some polish to a screenshot too.

    I suppose I should balance out the criticism with a compliment... I bet you have a great personality!