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16th August 2011
Post #1
July 2010
88 Posts

I realize its dark as fuck.
C&C
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16th August 2011
Post #2
October 2008
1,156 Posts
Can't see shit, and the little I spot seems very bland and effortless.
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17th August 2011
Post #3
May 2010
851 Posts
Yep, that's the perfect place all right. A pitch black room.
Wonderful.
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18th August 2011
Post #4
Gold Member
August 2011
20,109 Posts
"So... should we hide in the trees, or...?"
"Nah, let's stay in the one clear area down a linear stream. They'll never see that coming."
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19th August 2011
Post #5
April 2005
68 Posts
You may want to look up some background depth of field tutorials and/or fog to soften up the jaggies on the trees. It'd also help to bring out the foreground to make it clearer what's going on.
Also her left arm looks awkward dangling there, it looks as if shes reaching for something. Fingerposing will help with that, adds some polish to a screenshot too.
I suppose I should balance out the criticism with a compliment... I bet you have a great personality!