[TheTDawg3191]

hello friends! i just thought you'd like to see my latest creation!!
(in advance, i apologise if this title is already taken, but it's the best title i could come up with)
i also apologise for any sloppiness, as this was a first time run with HAT.

[Sylerr]

Okay first, your intro it's way to long and boooring. It's almost 34 seconds long. The hat animation could be a bit faster and less sloppy but it looks okay.

The biggest problem is that the movie is way to slow, the dragon thing at point A has a lot of scenes that last for-ever without anything really happening, you want your video to be as fast phased as possible this isn't a big budget video so people will get bored and stop the video. This who video could be about 1 minute long.

But yeah this isn't bad or extremely good, but yeah it's your first try.

[MrTwicks]

nice slideshow

[VaSTinY]

Animations were pretty nice for something from HAT, one of the better ones that I've seen.

Anime of all things though, NOPE

[TheTDawg3191]

[QUOTE=VaSTinY;31667064]Animations were pretty nice for something from HAT, one of the better ones that I've seen.

Anime of all things though, NOPE[/QUOTE

i personally don't profess to love anime either. but i sometimes throw them in anyways...there's always some anime fans out there trolling youtube, i figure why not give them some eye candy?

Edited:

woooaaaaaahhhhhh...didnt mean for that wierdness to happen.....

[AttemptedPants]

I watched the whole thing. Basically what Sylerr said, and the bloopers at the end were not bloopers at all. Do you even know what bloopers are?

Why are you criticizing other people when you are new? It just saddens me when somebody does that when somebody critiques their work. You're also assuming things about them when you don't know anything about who they are. Please, for the love of God and all that is holy, just don't try to seem better, like you know everything.

[gnome_kitten]

Like everyone else said, it's way too slow and the intro and bloopers took up too much of the video.

But honestly I thought it was actually pretty good. The movements were smooth (albeit a bit too slow) and the fight with the monster thing was actually pretty cool.

If you just speed up a few things in post, add more to the story and less to the bloopers and intro and maybe a bit less pauses without anything happening, I'd say you have some good potential in you!

Oh and incase it wasn't obvious, people here kinda hate anime so you might wanna be careful when you post that stuff here (I myself don't really mind).

[TheTDawg3191]

AttemptedPants posted:

I watched the whole thing. Basically what Sylerr said, and the bloopers at the end were not bloopers at all. Do you even know what bloopers are?

Why are you criticizing other people when you are new? It just saddens me when somebody does that when somebody critiques their work. You're also assuming things about them when you don't know anything about who they are. Please, for the love of God and all that is holy, just don't try to seem better, like you know everything.

i honestly didn't mean to sound like i'm criticizing anyone.i never said that i was better, but i do apologise if i came off that way. it's just that i get tired of all the people who don't have the patience to watch a whole video before making a decision. and in all honesty, YES, i know what a blooper reel is. i just half-assed that one at the time because i was shooting for a 5 minute minimum, and needed some filler. I'm already working on Part 2 with people's comments in mind, and i hope this doesn't make for a bad first impression on you.

[tehMuffinMan]

You made fake bloopers for a cheap laugh

[Slacker996]

The anime part made my dick sink back into my waist.

[lomein]

DA.
I lol'd heartily.
people coulda moved a little faster, but other than that, excellent. job well done on the whole thing.

[Kartoffel]

I see you have some slight interest in 40k, but I only figure this because of the hive tyrant.

To make this video better, the soldier should have been on RED team, because RED ones go faster.

[TheTDawg3191]

Kartoffel posted:

I see you have some slight interest in 40k, but I only figure this because of the hive tyrant.

To make this video better, the soldier should have been on RED team, because RED ones go faster.

thanks for the input. although, it's actually a Swarm Lord. you can even check with Necrobard on that.

Edited:

tehMuffinMan posted:

You made fake bloopers for a cheap laugh

i know they were shitty. it was more filler than anything else. i wanted to shoot for 5 minutes. i'll be sure to have more actual video in part 2.

[oakman26]

I wonder who the maker of GARRYS mod is? Hmm?

[TheTDawg3191]

oakman26 posted:

I wonder who the maker of GARRYS mod is? Hmm?

yes, there ARE people that are THAT clueless...sad to say.