[xVandal3x]

A multi-shot scene. Trying to be gritty, with a bit of tragedy thrown in. Basically a thug about to execute someone on behalf of a big-shot criminal dude.

Exposition by Big-Shot 70s Gangster Throwback:


Looking Death in the Eye:


Transfixed Innocent Bystanders:


Accepting His Fate:


-BLAM-

Still new to posing/screenshot-ing so C/C would be appreciated.

[The_J_Hat]

Try not to do multi shots (almost everyone does when they start out, so don't feel bad).

Also, when using DOF, use Super DOF because it looks much better.

Not all that bad for being new. Also, the gangster reminded me of Jules Winifield.

[GuyWithTheName]

2nd last image, bearded white alma with black parents. Why would they adopt a girl with a beard ;p

[xVandal3x]

It's just the lighting that makes her look bearded, but yeah I thought that too when I was taking the picture, I assume it's supposed to be dirt or something. And it's hard to tell in the dark but the woman is white, so I recolored Alma to be tan-ish to try and convince people she was mixed-heritage...didn't work I guess hahaha.

[TheGoodDoctorF]

Lol'd at Alma.

[GoldenGnome]

the family watching is fucking hilarious

[Skerion]

xVandal3x posted:

Transfixed Innocent Bystanders:

That girl have a mustache

[merzlakov]

Alma
xD

[xVandal3x]

Ok, I shouldn't have used Alma, but there's not a lot of children mods out there to use, I had to make do. What about posing, use of space, etc.?

[Falcon Punch]

Lol @ that little kid

[TheGoodDoctorF]

Then fuck the children. You can just use the normal models.

[xVandal3x]

There, I re-skinned Alma to make her fit the scene a little better. Thoughts?

[GuyWithTheName]

I would have suggested that if you wanted to make a screenshot, make one image.
Just put at least an hour and half into creating the scene, building up the elements and then rather then reskinning Alma, use an image editor and just have at it with the picture until it looks awesome. Multiple screenshots aren't really necessary unless you think you can't communicate the whole idea in one image.

Also I like the cars in the background of the image with the family, the lights look nice.

Try to reduce the motion blur ect, it allows you to make the background look clear so you can add more elements. Then just fill it in, make realistic looking background items you know, maybe add different lighting.

The reskin is nice though, very crisp.

[xVandal3x]

All right, I'll keep that in mind, thanks.