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  1. 5th August 2011 Post #1
    Viper123_SWE
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    Well i've been posing for a while now, but i haven't got much critisism from my friends or other since those screenshots are on STEAM. So folks, i give you, "Team Spartan".



    C&C Please!
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  2. 5th August 2011 Post #2
    Exorade
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    Looks like you've shrunked it horizontally.
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  3. 5th August 2011 Post #3
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    Team Anorexic
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    Spectre1406 posted:
    Team Anorexic
    Very constructive...
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  5. 5th August 2011 Post #5
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    Why are they so thin, man. 'Cause that's, like, unhealthy.
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  6. 5th August 2011 Post #6
    Spectre1406
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    Too much space between the ragdolls and check the posing on the legs, they look awkward.

    Also, did you squeeze the picture?
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  7. 5th August 2011 Last edited by masterfgh; 5th August 2011 at 12:16PM. Post #7
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    Dat bloom, posing looks pretty solid though.
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  8. 5th August 2011 Post #8
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    Spectre1406 posted:
    Too much space between the ragdolls and check the posing on the legs, they look awkward.

    Also, did you squeeze the picture?
    Ok, i'll try fix the legs next time. No i didn't squeeze the pic, i uploaded it to tinypic :P

    Edited:

    masterfgh posted:
    Dat bloom, posing looks pretty solid though.
    Thanks :)
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  9. 5th August 2011 Post #9
    JimmyA
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    Don't use tinypic if it did that and make sure to crop out shit that isn't needed(all that space above the helicopter.
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  10. 5th August 2011 Post #10
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    Ok thanks for the critisism guys :)
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  11. 5th August 2011 Post #11
    mutle
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    Oh, it's noot bad for a first one!
    Just a bit weird because of the "thinned" image.
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  12. 5th August 2011 Post #12
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    ok so a bunch of vietnam era soldiers with a futuristic spartan with a minigun are standing on what looks to be a.... uhhh ocean or some thing?

    nothing wrong or confusing here no sir
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  13. 6th August 2011 Post #13
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    thenecronlord posted:
    ok so a bunch of vietnam era soldiers with a futuristic spartan with a minigun are standing on what looks to be a.... uhhh ocean or some thing?

    nothing wrong or confusing here no sir
    Ok, so with other words you think i should improve the concept, right?

    Also, thanks everyone for the informative stuff, i'll try to remember all these things next time!
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  14. 6th August 2011 Post #14
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    Viper123_SWE posted:
    Ok, so with other words you think i should improve the concept, right?

    Also, thanks everyone for the informative stuff, i'll try to remember all these things next time!
    concept shure
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