Work on your posing, maybe look at yourself in the mirror and try to stand like the ragdolls. If you can't do it, then don't pose them like that. The writing I understand, you being an immigrant and having English as a second language. Maybe show it to a friend who spoke English from birth and see what they say.
I agree with above.
What I don't agree with is the whole "You shouldn't post this here because we dun like it".
It's the screenshot section and people are allowed to post whatever the fuck it is that they consider artistic or whatever it is that they themselves like as long as it is by the rule book. This of course doesn't mean that people have to like it or agree with it. But it's not definitely anyone's place to tell others what they're allowed and not allowed to post.