[Mooov43]

This comic takes you back in time to when he was first starting out... This is his story..

[action hank]

geat comioc 420/10

[minilandstan]

No timeclock?

I am disapoint

[dustyjo]

What an amazing story. Truly touched my heart from beginning to end.

[Lebowski]

a masterpiece and an accurate portrayal

[The Castro]

You've made me rethink my life.

[TheGoodDoctorF]

The character development made Tolkien the authors bitch.

[Craptasket]

Lol.

[Morphology53]

lmao

[Angry Frenchman]

Reporting, moving on.

[BloodyDragon]

needs more tlc

[SN202]

These arent/were never funny, pls. stop.

[Craptasket]

SN202 posted:

These arent/were never funny, pls. stop.

This is not constructive criticism

[Back_Slash]

Okay.
It looks like you didn't try to put any effort in to this.
The posing has numerous errors.
You might want to look at your self in a mirror then try to pose what you see.

[Angry Frenchman]

Craptasket posted:

This is not constructive criticism

http://www.facepunch.com/threads/106...longer-allowed

- Trolling: A troll's intent is to anger, frustrate you, not if you are offended by their constructive criticism. When you see someone trolling, don't reply to them. Report them.

You don't seem to be willing to lock the thread tho, so here is your c&c which will be pointless :
Posing is shit, improve it.
Graphics are shit, max them.
Story is shit, improve it.
Garry's Mod 7 is outdated, buy Gmod 10 or get Gmod 9 and use dontbuffmypylon.
Jokes are not even funny even for the people involved (if you seriously even smiled by reading this, then your humor is as bad as the women of The Talk's one)



Nice to see once again moderators love this section and will do whatever it takes to keep it nice, especially after a pretty big change that melted the different subforums together.

[YourFriendJoe]

Posing is bad,looks like you didn't even spend half of a minute posing them
Graphics=whatever it looks like when you just took a picture
seriously,buy gmod,7 is reaaaaly outdated
horrible humor
this dosent make any sense
the text sucks


other than that,good post

[gsp1995]

The story kept me in from start to finish. I don't even have words to express how I feel about this.. but it was very emotive for certain. Also, I loved the life lessons in this.

[Caluminium]

It was very emotional and tense.

[Egg_Toaster]

Angry Frenchman posted:

http://www.facepunch.com/threads/106...longer-allowed



You don't seem to be willing to lock the thread tho, so here is your c&c which will be pointless :
Posing is shit, improve it.
Graphics are shit, max them.
Story is shit, improve it.
Garry's Mod 7 is outdated, buy Gmod 10 or get Gmod 9 and use dontbuffmypylon.
Jokes are not even funny even for the people involved (if you seriously even smiled by reading this, then your humor is as bad as the women of The Talk's one)



Nice to see once again moderators love this section and will do whatever it takes to keep it nice, especially after a pretty big change that melted the different subforums together.

Piss off

[halflambada]

rrerr

[7H3_H4CK3R]

I'm truely inspired. Thank you, Thank you for inspiring me so with such an emotional tale. I will go redownload Garry's mod 7 and try to make something just as inspiring as you.