[Someguy13]

Hello fellow Facepunchers! I've been lurking around in FP since January 2009 and I thought I'd start making something to entertain you.

I'll be doing this comic and I hope I can finish this (high school is beginning soon, too busy in real life etc...), but the most important: I hope you enjoy this.
(Also I'm sorry about my English, there might be some grammar problems because I'm not a Native English speaker)







Fun facts
This prologue took one week to finish and the editing was about 80% of the time.

Also please give me constructive criticism, because I started using GIMP two weeks ago and I'm afraid this isn't too artistic.

Special Thanks To
Ayesdyef's Female Scout
ctf_haarp (very awesome A/D CTF map, I highly recommend it)
TF2
All of you who helped me to make this better

[Exorade]

Pretty good.

You could have worked a bit more on that layout during the week.

[Someguy13]

I'll make a better one in next one, thanks (this is my first comic so I'm kinda testing different layouts and see which one is the most suitable)

[YourFriendJoe]

good,good.can't wait to read the rest when its finished.there could of been some effect when the engineer was shot(trust me,only the weak die when a gun is only pointed at them).

[Someguy13]

Thanks mate, noted.

[Wearwolf]

It's very good, I actually like the layout.

The only grammatical problem is "The RED team are taking a break from their victory". Taking a break from their victory sounds like they were victorious and then they decided to not be victorious for a while. Also team is singular as you are only talking about one of them. I believe the phrase you want is "The RED team is taking a break after their victory".

[Someguy13]

Made a quick fix, very appreciated

[Johan123]

i felt some of the posing was a little bit weird, but i liked it