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Been a while since I've done one of these.
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kill yourself, and be a ghost
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:smithicide:
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First go into tools and turn of hints
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Punch everybody and steal their money. Then, buy proper protection.
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Take the gun and shoot everyone.
Deny everything
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use low quality water to have more FPS.
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Admit your comic is not worthy because there are no pigs in this comic.
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Team up with a talking head crab and solve mysteries.
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Kill yourself to end the comic.
Or go to the drawing board and think of a plot.
Seriously, these interactive comics are dumb and never get any where. For good reason too; they have nothing going for them. Don't just throw models into a map and expect the audience to shit out a plot. Give us something to work with rather than "Okay guys, I'm bored give me shit to do." Create a general plot. Give the character a mission or a purpose. Otherwise this is nothing than a feeble attempt at entertainment.
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You should learn how to properly create speech bubbles, learn about camera angles and how they can affect the mood and effects you are looking to achieve.
And pick a better map.
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Hairybastard, I'm simply using a program, if you want better ones, kindly direct me to a tutorial. And Camera angle wise, I'm not hoping for any real mood in those. It's an introduction. and Wolfe, This is the beginning. I have another, better, comic comming out that isnt interactive and has a major plot. But please don't judge this based on the first couple of things.
At any rate, in response to some comments:
(couldnt remove the white, sorry I did try)
So, pick one.
And just to clear the air, There will be no animal companions. I'm not trying to copy the story of Piggy Love <3 This will eventually get a bit more serious and stray far from any similarity.
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You see, the problem is this is just about how every interactive comic before this has started.
The intro to an interactive comic should entice the viewer to continue on; which this, unfortunately, doesn't.
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Don't pick a door and end comic.
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Well you totally ignore any C&C so I'm out..
But why did the color of his suit change? lol.
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I'll be honest, I came in expecting this:
(Spartan Hoplites)
So I'm disappointed, because not only was I wrong about the subject, the comic is terrible.
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>Randomly change colors again first.
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I'm not ignoring C&C. Read what I said. Tell me how to change the speech bubbles to suit your tastes. Most of the C&C is stop making this.
And his color changed because I forgot to save. So for stories sake, its all the dust from the fight.
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"stop making this" is constructive enough in this comic's case.
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>Open all of the doors but don't go in any of them.
>Sit and think about what you've done.
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Realise this is failure, and that you should listen to everyone and shut this thing down.
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Not really. It's not telling me what is wrong with it. I can't fix what is unknown. Tell me, and maybe next time it will be fixed.But saying "Fix _____" isn't what i need, I need HOW to fix it. Telling me it says absolutely nothing and doesn't help me what-so-ever.
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Seriously, you should not have started this.
that welcoming was pretty dull.
like "Hi welcome to mobenix." that was shit, and the posing sucked.
random characters. bad map. no plot.
make (or not) another one. with a more detailed interactive.
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blow your brains all over the map, therefore you will be everywhere in Mobenix, saving us from the story
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Well thanks for being honest. If I do ever attempt this again, I'll try to make it more plot oriented and fix everything else.
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"And his color changed because I forgot to save."
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god this is painfully bad. I dont think anybody wants to see this continued
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I have, I'm giving up on it. You all can stop complaining. And Rarara, I was actually mad that I forgot to save.
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how about you start over and change the intro.also,you could try to polish up your posing.take the time to pose.for instance,how long did it take for you to pose the spartan shooting everyone?
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One, Camera angles, improve your detail, dont use like three ragdolls per shot, and dont magically changecolors, also dont flop them around, and spray blood detail underneath unless you're going for that kinda
old-school comic, secondly, I dont think you should make the screen shots that big, try resizing them into a comic book format, or something, like this
But ot that small
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You seriously want me to try this over? If I get three more people to say try again, I will.
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well this might not happen......why not just make an actual comic itself instead of an interative one,and post it somewhere....like deviantart?or comicfurry.I would support it.
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I do have a deviantart, I may post it there, then. My profile on it is under the username of H4CK3R116.
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>Do a backflip
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>Do a frontflip
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noted
also if you need any help with plot,im your man
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Thanks
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