1. Post #1
    Trek's Avatar
    March 2010
    2,574 Posts
    Don Clemente has sent his regards

    I wanted it to be an opening scene of comic about mafia, but I lost my inspiration. God, why?

    Anyway, here you have it. That rain sucks, my first ever effect added in Photoshop.



    Here's the original:
    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/16051712/original.jpg

    Please, comment and criticize.
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  2. Post #2
    JurajIsNotPirat's Avatar
    September 2009
    5,115 Posts
    Zoom in with the camera to avoid the fisheye effect.
    Stitch more screenshots together if your scene won't fit in a single one.

  3. Post #3
    duuuupes

    Or are those different models in the back that are so similar to those in the front?

  4. Post #4
    Gold Member
    Zupinata's Avatar
    May 2006
    923 Posts
    Looks like dupes, with different skins

  5. Post #5
    Trek's Avatar
    March 2010
    2,574 Posts
    Dupes, cuz I'm so lazy. But I made SDoF to hide it :F

  6. Post #6
    pMnky's Avatar
    May 2007
    1,107 Posts
    Good idea but the execution is quiet awkward.

  7. Post #7
    Gold Member

    November 2006
    602 Posts
    Dupes, cuz I'm so lazy. But I made SDoF to hide it :F
    Well you failed to hide it.

  8. Post #8
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    blooregardo's Avatar
    September 2006
    1,289 Posts

  9. Post #9
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    Dennab
    July 2009
    9,002 Posts
    It's not too bad, but looks a little sloppy. The posing's good, albeit too many people with one hand over the wrist. I do believe people who do that usually hold their other hand, not their wrist. The rain is not the worst I've seen, but it's too dark and two-dimensional.

  10. Post #10
    XDcell96's Avatar
    January 2010
    309 Posts
    Actually i think making a mafia comic is a good idea, i am now playing mafia 1 and that game is amazing maybe you can learn from this game, maybe the game will give you inspiration.