[Trek]

Don Clemente has sent his regards

I wanted it to be an opening scene of comic about mafia, but I lost my inspiration. God, why?

Anyway, here you have it. That rain sucks, my first ever effect added in Photoshop.



Here's the original:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/16051712/original.jpg

Please, comment and criticize.

[JurajIsNotPirat]

Zoom in with the camera to avoid the fisheye effect.
Stitch more screenshots together if your scene won't fit in a single one.

[LunaBadger]

duuuupes

Or are those different models in the back that are so similar to those in the front?

[Zupinata]

Looks like dupes, with different skins

[Trek]

Dupes, cuz I'm so lazy. But I made SDoF to hide it :F

[pMnky]

Good idea but the execution is quiet awkward.

[Zantze]

Trek posted:

Dupes, cuz I'm so lazy. But I made SDoF to hide it :F

Well you failed to hide it.

[blooregardo]

[A big fat ass]

It's not too bad, but looks a little sloppy. The posing's good, albeit too many people with one hand over the wrist. I do believe people who do that usually hold their other hand, not their wrist. The rain is not the worst I've seen, but it's too dark and two-dimensional.

[XDcell96]

Actually i think making a mafia comic is a good idea, i am now playing mafia 1 and that game is amazing maybe you can learn from this game, maybe the game will give you inspiration.