[Charred13]

These are the first serious attempts at screenshots which I have done. Please be fair and give creative criticism =)
The 3rd one is my personal favourite!

[Steven :D]

Better than my first poses for sure, just watch out for the clipping on the ragdolls and try to make it smooth. Also, faceposing is really a must if your going to show the whole face. :buddy:

[Spectre1406]

Charred13 posted:

Give an expression on this one and fix the posing.

[Charred13]

Steven :D posted:

Better than my first poses for sure, just watch out for the clipping on the ragdolls and try to make it smooth. Also, faceposing is really a must if your going to show the whole face. :buddy:

Ahh yes, forgot about that one. I've got it saved so I'll improve on that one until I think it's perfect

[The Castro]

I can't get over those Russian's chimp faces.

[minilandstan]

The teeth...

[pMnky]

Hahahah god dammit that guy in the first pic made me spray my coffee all over my screen.. I hate you.

[Charred13]

Okay, had a go at improving the ones which you guys said needed work. For the WWII one I think its just a bad model for faceposing...

[antianan]

I see a lack of editing on this one

Charred13 posted:

Edited:

voilà. That's better

[kevinseven]

Charred13 posted:

Okay, had a go at improving the ones which you guys said needed work. For the WWII one I think its just a bad model for faceposing...

Is that supposed to be a blood spray? Because if so that is a great use of the tree model and I love it.

[Charred13]

kevinseven posted:

Is that supposed to be a blood spray? Because if so that is a great use of the tree model and I love it.

Yeah, I didn't have any models that cast a shadow which looks anything like a splatter so i had to settle for that lol

[AaronM202]

Charred13 posted:

Yeah, I didn't have any models that cast a shadow which looks anything like a splatter so i had to settle for that lol

I..oh...so thats what that was.

[Buck Fitches]

Fix the arm on the Nick one and an angrier expression, not struggling. You're already showing improvement, which is good.

[Chonch]

Charred13 posted:

Apparently Nick is fighting Medusa.