1. Post #1
    GrayBlack's Avatar
    March 2009
    187 Posts

    Dont comment the graphics or quality. Tell me what to improve.

  2. Post #2
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    Fussy!'s Avatar
    June 2007
    9,280 Posts
    To improve: the angle and generally the posing.

    The posing is stiff and not very dynamic, there is no movement shown.
    The angle is very restricting and it really isen't good for the scene, as you want to show a equal amount of the characters and the scene. Also known as composition.

    I'm gonna comment on the quality/graphics anyway, as those two are also key elements;
    The graphics SHOULD be set to the highest when taking a picture, if it lags alittle that's fine.
    The smoke is quite bad, to add, and the image is very... brown-ish.
    Make it more colorfull, not too much, and it'll be much better.

    Remember, higher your resolution aswell!

  3. Post #3
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    ChestyMcGee's Avatar
    August 2008
    27,033 Posts
    lighting is too flat and dark in overall value
    stark white concrete is too distracting
    the muzzleflash on the chopper is unnecessary, not just in terms of realism, but it's too distracting to the eye
    crack in the falling down building shows.... the sky behind it? odd
    smoke is overlapping the car in the foreground

    background needs some desaturation and lower contrast - the picture is too busy with the same contrast throughout. get some depth by making the background less colourful and contrasted - you can do this by using the in-game fog options.
    lack of depth also makes the foreground too busy - all the characters kinda merge into each other
    no idea what the focus of your picture is. naturally it should be the soldier in the mid-ground with the knife but there's so much other stuff going on and the whole picture is so evenly contrasted that i'm not really sure what i should be looking at.

    posing is decent enough
    scenebuild is okay

  4. Post #4
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    Joazzz's Avatar
    June 2008
    26,038 Posts
    The knife is a myth.

  5. Post #5
    7H3_H4CK3R's Avatar
    February 2011
    426 Posts
    I have to agree with everyone else. The Smoke looks bad, the angle isnt great, the Apache is distracting, the crack looks bad, posing is stiff, and everything has a brownish tinge. Its OK, just work on it.
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  6. Post #6
    Irespawnoften's Avatar
    February 2009
    3,916 Posts
    I'd hate to file the paper work after this.

    'Yes sir, my partner died after challenging the enemy to a knife fight instead of shooting him.'