[Sumaher4]

plz rate :)

[darth-veger]

Your picture is broken

[Sumaher4]

DAMN IT , I CANT SEEM TO GET HOW THE LINKS WORK

[darth-veger]

Its rather a normal Spy standing there with a shooped smoke coming out of the barrel

So yeah out of 5 i would give it a 1

[ChestyMcGee]

stop messing around with layer effects

[Sumaher4]

yh i tell u its not the best . but... u know newbie :p

Edited:

ChestyMcGee posted:

stop messing around with layer effects

what are u talking about? this is my 1st EDITED pic... :?

[darth-veger]

Ow and one thing, try to improve your grammar (By not using "u" "yh" or something like that)
And try to replace the text emoticons ":p :? xD xP" with the FP emoticons

[Sumaher4]

:doh: how fool of me I am sorry

[darth-veger]

Sumaher4 posted:

:doh: how fool of me I am sorry

Everyone has to learn it in the beginning

[ChestyMcGee]

Sumaher4 posted:

what are u talking about? this is my 1st EDITED pic... :?

so on your 2nd edited pic, don't mess with layer effects

[Spectre1406]

-what am I thinking-

[ChestyMcGee]

The posing is actually kinda dynamic though now I think about it, only the grip of the pistol is on his wrist for some reason and his left fist is not properly formed (how do people get this wrong? you'd have to have never made a fist in your life to not realise that the thumb doesn't go under the fingers)

keep it up

[TheGoodDoctorF]

Smoke looks nice. And from the look of it he used "jpeg_quality 100"

Keep it up :ese:

[Sumaher4]

thanks :)

[minilandstan]

The posing is quite nice, and there's a FP emotion for just about anything.

:frown:

:q:

Also, you might want to blur the smoke slightly, or turn down the occupancy.
And the lighting is quite nice for a first pic.