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Adam62692 · 16th February 2011

Mainly for Criticism. Even on the photo shop.

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**Mr.Dounut** · 16th February 2011

would look a lot better if you worked on the gun fire, maybe add some tracers

**minilandstan** · 16th February 2011

Real guns don't have tracers.

**Ilwrath** · 16th February 2011

minilandstan posted:

Real guns don't have tracers.

Uh, yes they do. Not every round though, on MGs usually every fifth is a tracer.

The camera angle leaves quite alot of empty and unnecessary space, and the edit could use some serious work, that muzzleflash looks like a big +. Also, use SDoF instead of normal DoF.

Adam62692 · 17th February 2011

Thanks for all. I'm new to photo shop so I'm still trying to figure out how to use it.

**OutLawed Blade** · 17th February 2011

That muzzle flash... yikes, work on that.

**rossmum** · 17th February 2011

Work on your composition and posing. Don't bother with editing until you've got both of those sorted.

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minilandstan posted:

Real guns don't have tracers.

I have no idea what universe you live in, but it sure as fuck isn't mine. Yes they do, but they're generally used for machine guns.

Moose · 17th February 2011

when the minigun fires it emits a cross muzzleflash

he must be a republican, i already hate it