[superadamwo]

This is a grade 12 communication technology project I've been working on for a week or two. It's still in a very rough stage but since I uploaded it to youtube to show some friends I figured I would post it here as well. It isn't due for another week or two so I still have a lot of time to make changes. It would really help me out if you guys could post any suggestions you have for how I can improve it, like shots I should replace, effects to apply to make it look better etc.

[FumplesAlt]

Interesting. I can see the effort. Maybe make the radio on black scenes more surreal-looking, maybe using glow, soft contrast, etc to make it more dreamlike

Edit: I didn't watch the whole thing when I made that suggestion. Your cinematography was fucking gorgeous, and your ideas with the reversal of the bridge destruction and the other place was VERY well done.

5/5. This was unique and I loved it.

[SlayerFin]

Really sweet, like Fumples said, it's really unique and camera angles were really well fitting. 5 stars from me too!

[Captain Ringo]

superadamwo that was awesome. The editing was great, the cinematography was great, the song was perfect. I did see one problem though, at 2:37 you can see yourself floating in mid air. I loved the scene of the road showing it destroyed and fixed, great work and can't wait to see the finished product.

[ToNz]

Whoa that is extraordinary. very unique. the finished product is gonna be epic.

[Shanethe13]

That was really nicely made. The scene with the sun's rays going through the window at the end was beautiful. I'd have to agree with Fumples for the space scenes though: some surreal effects should work great there. Good luck on the assignment!

[azn_boi9832]

Really Nicely done! Love the camera angles and the moods in which you express through the shots and music! Goood Job man!