1. Post #1
    Advisor's Avatar
    March 2006
    94 Posts
    Reply With Quote Edit / Delete Reply Poland Show Events Artistic Artistic x 2Dumb Dumb x 1 (list)

  2. Post #2
    Tbonia will grow larger!
    McTbone's Avatar
    March 2010
    6,275 Posts
    No other way to say "Fuck you!" like a Desert Eagle to the face.

    Awesome picture, dude.
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  3. Post #3
    Angush's Avatar
    May 2010
    214 Posts
    Its too blurry.

  4. Post #4
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    ChestyMcGee's Avatar
    August 2008
    27,033 Posts
    So much blur... and dust... and flat lighting.

    It's just really hard to make out anything of interest.

    Also, the blood is less motion-blurred than everything else which makes it stand out a lot.

    Edited:

    And no shadows?

  5. Post #5
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
    11,579 Posts
    Your pictures are usually bearable, but this one is just awful. The focus is all fucked up, you can't concentrate on anything so I can't really give you any critique either other than tone down the blur man, damn.

  6. Post #6
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    Crazy Knife's Avatar
    November 2006
    2,670 Posts
    You should keep the radial blur on the right side, but delete it on the left and slowly drift it into a motion blur to give the illusion of the car moving, otherwise the entire radial blur makes it focused on them iddle of the picture

  7. Post #7
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    Santz's Avatar
    June 2009
    6,867 Posts
    Uhm you could crop the hole upper and down area of the picture and just leave the center, it would cover the fact that there are no shadows, also try to make it a bit less blurry.

    Apart from that the picture looks pretty nice to me.