1. Post #1
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
    11,579 Posts
    ... It's not fair! What the fuck is he going to do with 20 dollars?! Is that all I'm worth, 20 stinking dollars?!
    Crying and getting upset isn't going to help, Claire.
    How can you be so calm about this?!
    I've taken millions of peoples lives, Claire. You get used to it after a while.
    I hope this scumbag gets it good!
    His time will come, that I'm sure of. Now, before we go, is there anything you want to know?
    If this would not have happened, what would have happened to me?
    It's easier for you if I do not answer that question.
    I hate you, I hate all of this! It's not fair!
    Everyone has their time, Claire. Are you ready?
    For what?
    You'll see...
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  2. Post #2
    The Combine's Avatar
    July 2009
    9,915 Posts
    The Ghost effect could have been better and the camera angle kinda leaves wasted space and shazzle.
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  3. Post #3
    exhale77's Avatar
    January 2010
    2,136 Posts
    Very empty and the ghost effect does look a bit lazy.

  4. Post #4
    Fabulous Vailglorous Extraordinaire
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    February 2007
    10,709 Posts
    He must have a really busy job or there are more like him

  5. Post #5
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
    11,579 Posts
    He must have a really busy job or there are more like him
    busiest there is!

    and yes, the ghost effect is lazy AS FUCK, but i had no idea what else to dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

  6. Post #6
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    July 2008
    5,820 Posts
    Continue this. I wanna see where it goes really badly.
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  7. Post #7
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    halflambada's Avatar
    January 2008
    9,279 Posts
    Continue this. I wanna see where it goes really badly.
    I agree with this

    if you don't, I will fly out to your country and shank you.

  8. Post #8
    CUNT DESTROYER
    Hunterdnrc's Avatar
    August 2008
    11,155 Posts
    Balls this is cool.
    I'm with Halfy up above me.

  9. Post #9
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
    11,579 Posts
    SHANK IS A GOOD THING, RIGHT?

    Right?
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    Fabulous Vailglorous Extraordinaire
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    February 2007
    10,709 Posts
    It's slicing you up

  11. Post #11
    CUNT DESTROYER
    Hunterdnrc's Avatar
    August 2008
    11,155 Posts
    Pfft, it's extreme hugging.

    With a knife.

  12. Post #12
    Fabulous Vailglorous Extraordinaire
    Haxxer's Avatar
    February 2007
    10,709 Posts
    in his stomach

  13. Post #13
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    Ehanced_AI's Avatar
    July 2008
    5,820 Posts
    SHANK IS A GOOD THING, RIGHT?

    Right?
    Yes it is


    It's like Shag

    but with a knife.

    and it's usually aimed at your vital organs.

  14. Post #14
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    November 2008
    4,250 Posts
    The dialouge is pretty awkard and unatural.. The pic is not bad tho, and I don't think the ghost effect is too bad.

  15. Post #15
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    June 2008
    26,038 Posts
    Dead girls make me sad. I don't know why, they just do.
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  16. Post #16
    Dennab
    February 2010
    5,925 Posts
    I love the idea.

    Execution not so much. There's nothing really wrong with it, but it could have been better.

  17. Post #17
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    Fire Kracker's Avatar
    January 2007
    12,173 Posts
    it looks very lazily done i expected more from you

  18. Post #18
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
    11,579 Posts
    i have a confession to make.

    i was really lazy with this one :(
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  19. Post #19
    I AM A PUTRID FUCK WHO CHASES AFTER PEOPLE'S VANS, SCARES GIRLS, FELL FOR A RANDOM FUCK ON THE INTERNET WHO I'VE NEVER EVEN SEEN, AND SHOVED RUSTY NAILS DOWN MY COCK FOR THEM.
    demoniclemon's Avatar
    July 2008
    4,193 Posts
    I can't say I like this image, the background possibly is why this is not appealing to me at all, Francis is posed strangely, and why would he flip off the dead girl after he walked 10-20 fee from her unless he somehow see's her ghost? It just does not feel right for me at all.
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  20. Post #20
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    June 2008
    26,038 Posts
    I hate ghosts.

  21. Post #21
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    Butthurter's Avatar
    August 2007
    10,281 Posts
    The posing is terrible. Only the guy in the jacket looks good, except for his finger pose which looks so 'forced" in. Is he trying to resist the urge from fapping at the presence of another ghost?
    I do however like the ghostly editing. But the blue light could have cast a slight light onto Zoey to give off a more haunting effect.

    The pic isn't good at all. Though, I hope you do a lot better than this when you continue the pic.
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  22. Post #22
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    September 2009
    5,044 Posts
    Grim Reaper sure did clean himself up pretty good.

    And you guys don't get jokes anymore. :(
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  23. Post #23
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    May 2009
    7,530 Posts
    I can't say I like this image, the background possibly is why this is not appealing to me at all, Francis is posed strangely, and why would he flip off the dead girl after he walked 10-20 fee from her unless he somehow see's her ghost? It just does not feel right for me at all.
    What? he isn't flipping her off, he's just holding his pistol

  24. Post #24
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
    11,579 Posts
    hahahha flipping her off hahah

    that would be funny as hell

    "HEY GURL, I JUST KILLED YOU. FUCK YO GHOST, BITCH"

  25. Post #25
    I AM A PUTRID FUCK WHO CHASES AFTER PEOPLE'S VANS, SCARES GIRLS, FELL FOR A RANDOM FUCK ON THE INTERNET WHO I'VE NEVER EVEN SEEN, AND SHOVED RUSTY NAILS DOWN MY COCK FOR THEM.
    demoniclemon's Avatar
    July 2008
    4,193 Posts
    What? he isn't flipping her off, he's just holding his pistol
    Must be the library computers making it look a little dark for me, and the finger just seemed at the middle when I first looked, but still, one detail I got wrong still doesn't make me like the image any more.
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  26. Post #26
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    October 2006
    5,598 Posts
    The posing on Francis is what I don't really like. Just doesn't seem too right to me. Other than that I like it. I like the idea () and everything.

    Goodsies.
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  27. Post #27
    Better Than Jacknife
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    December 2009
    9,164 Posts
    looks like she took a nap Grabbing her boob